Reviews for Down They Fell
ravenwingedyokai chapter 10 . 4/29/2014
i found this story beautiful, i have never cried this much at a fanfic...
labasignai chapter 10 . 7/25/2010
Great work.
demonduck132 chapter 7 . 4/17/2009
Why do you randomly dislike the guy with the big burn-scar on his face?
Storm Crow chapter 10 . 6/4/2008
I don't feel that you did a "crap job" on this story at all. You write beautifully, and you should be proud of your gift. The whole tale hints and suggests a deep grief that never fully gives into itself, and that too is beautiful. I know this review is way late, but please don't stop writing. Selah
MusicNinja chapter 10 . 7/7/2007
Aya! So sad...beautiful though. I loved the way you described everyone's reactions to their deaths. Espacially Gaara and Temari's. Muy triste. But fantastic as well.
ginger-05 chapter 3 . 4/27/2007
OMG. This story is so sad. I had to wipe my eyes to stop them from tearing up. But its good none the less
ghfrthdfhndgt chapter 10 . 3/25/2007
You did not do a crap job on this! I loved it! Even though it made me cry :'(

You have such a great writing style. I hope you continue to write stories for me to read!
Skyblue Advari chapter 10 . 3/25/2007
This is amazing, beautiful and...so heartbreaking. You write so well that I can picture this happening in the series. I can almost picture the episode in my head. I give this story a ten out of ten...

Peace Out

Ravencroft
SadPanda chapter 8 . 3/25/2007
Oh my. This chapter actually brought a tear to my eye. You got Hana's emotions very well.
Dunnoanymore chapter 10 . 3/25/2007
Beautifully written and very, very sad. *cries*