Reviews for Sparks
TheMajesticBeanCurd chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
I loves the ending, and the "Remus tastes like past." part. Sirius will missed Remus a lot since he smokes alone now :'(
hydraspit chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
This was wonderful! I dont usually like stories this short, but this was the perfect size to get your point across.

Really very well done!
xxanglophilexx chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Wonderful imagery and word choice. I especially liked the last line:

"The remnants of smoke on his empty lips taste like the future, but they’re bitter and stale."

Very nice.
rekahneko chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
I enjoyed your comparison between smoking and the phases of Sirius' life (or at least his life with Remus).

My favorite line: "He tastes like the past."

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Tysoyo Kalli chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
God I love the taste of cloves. This is a wonderful fic, I love reading about a character reminising about the past. Espically something so simple as smoking. Kind of reminds me how I started... and it was using the black djarum cloves... yum!
Scision chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
thats cool :U and kinda sad too...

"Remus tastes like tobacco and chocolate. He tastes like the past." I really like that line for some reason :D and the closing line is great way to wrap it all up. nice job!