|Reviews for While Simba was Gone|
| Scuta5 chapter 15 . 4/18/2007
You better not kill of Nala, I won't like that very much. Is Sarafina dead? I hope not. Nice chapter, update soon my Nala buddy.
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 14 . 4/16/2007
Nice! Can't wait to find out who gets hurt in the next chapter! Update soon!
| Riptide36 chapter 4 . 4/15/2007
I've only had time to read three chapters, but your story about Scar's dictatorship after Mùfasa's death is perhaps one of the best stories I've seen so far on this website (and a very dark story subject)! You've created a masterpiece that has everything that makes a good story great! I really couldn't help but feel sorry for the remaining lionesses through reading this, I must say, but it really is a brilliant read for anyone who has seen Lion King!
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 13 . 4/10/2007
Sweet! Update soon!
| Scuta5 chapter 13 . 4/10/2007
I like it, so cool, this is how you spell meerkat, and it is Pumbaa, not Pumba. just trying to help a good friend. I can't wait for the next chapters. update soon, my Nala buddy.
| princesstarfire chapter 13 . 4/10/2007
Go Nala! whoo ho thats my girl
| Scuta5 chapter 12 . 4/9/2007
So cool, I like it. Nala doubting that Simba did not go back, I could never think of that. Update soon.
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 12 . 4/9/2007
Good one! It's about time Simba takes down Scar. Can't wait till then!
| princesstarfire chapter 12 . 4/9/2007
Yea Finnaly that stubborn guy needed 2 bumps! but ill settele for 1 LOL
| princesstarfire chapter 10 . 4/8/2007
Poor Nala SIMBA IS A JERK i know he has suffered and i feel for the guy but nobody messes with Nala!
| Scuta5 chapter 11 . 4/8/2007
Cool, kind of like Simba talking to Mufasa, I like this story so much. Well update soon. Your Nala buddy.
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 11 . 4/8/2007
Despite it being short, nice chapter! I'm glad that you loved my idea and used it. Makes me feel great to help a fellow writer. As always, can't wait for the next chapter. Keep them rolling!
| TheForsakenShadow chapter 11 . 4/7/2007
Aw...this kinda brought tears to my eyes! D update soon!
| Fan Boy 101 chapter 10 . 4/6/2007
Good one! Although there weren't that many changes from the movie. Here's an idea for the next chapter. Have Nala search all night for Simba. Then make her doubt that she'll convince him to be king and make her think that all hope is lost. Soon, when she least expects it, have Nala see her dead father; telling her not to give up. I hope that helps. Update real soon.
| Scuta5 chapter 10 . 4/6/2007
Sweet! I like it, this is a great story. I almost cried, so sweet. update soon, Nala buddy.