|Reviews for Heart And Soul|
| Jess chapter 12 . 11/20/2014
This literally made me so happy then ripped my heart out, then made me super happy again numerous amount of times! Wow, just wow! Really enjoyed this!
| Buggus264 chapter 12 . 4/8/2013
I love you and hate you at the same .
| silfursvik chapter 12 . 2/6/2012
i love this! amazing story! you had me crying, the king "dying" and all.
i only have one problem with you, i don't think you understand the "M" rating. no sex...no M rating. there was hardly even a curse word! generally M rating implies sex, and when you click on an M rated story for mostly that reason, it's dissapointing to not have a single sex scene in it.
| Alltangledup95 chapter 1 . 7/3/2011
This story was sooo good please write a sequel!
| meconium chapter 12 . 7/26/2010
I think you need to edit your work a bit for spelling/grammatical errors and flesh out the plot a bit. I don't get a sense of the inner workings of the characters' minds. In other words, it's too event-driven - the action moves from one thing to another too abruptly, without adequate time spent on each scene -and sometimes the scenes don't add anything to the plot as a whole. A good example of this is Toby's illness. Oh no, Toby is sick. Oh good, Jareth heals Toby. See what I mean? Keep working at it!
| SesshomaruLoverandWife chapter 12 . 7/17/2010
Your stories are magical as Jareth himself. Please don't leave this story as is...we, your fans, implore you!
| Mistrust chapter 12 . 6/8/2009
i truely loved this story. i'm happy that you wrote it. all the time, i had mixed emotions that ranged from happy to mad to sad. i cried some. i really liked the story. i would like if you continued.
| ZigBabe chapter 12 . 4/11/2009
I love As The World Fall's Down it my favourite Bowie song
| ZigBabe chapter 11 . 4/11/2009
The "Oh, only forever, that not long at all really" line is from the song Underground isnt it? Anyway the story rocks, keep up the Labyrinth fanfic!
| ZigBabe chapter 6 . 4/11/2009
This is one of the best Labyrinth fanfics I have ever read, seriously, i love it!
| roesbud chapter 12 . 6/16/2008
it would be cool if you made a sepuel
| JarethLover chapter 12 . 8/2/2007
Wonderful! Hate the clifhanger though. You are truely blessed with talent. Keep up the great work!
| JarethLover chapter 7 . 8/2/2007
Very good. I cant wait to read more. One thing...you could really use an editor. You a quite a few spelling errors. Nothing big though. Keep up the good work!
| maskedpainter chapter 12 . 7/5/2007
i loved this story and your right it does leave so many openings for a sequal. i would like t prais all your funny jokes and inserts through out the whole story it made it hard to keep quite while i'm on the internet and my mom's asleep!
WANT A SEQUAL PLEASE!
| Ankantoiel chapter 12 . 6/26/2007
Great story with much trouble *hihi* All I need for such a rainy day ;)
Exists there a sequel?