Reviews for Saturday
bingbangboom714 chapter 1 . 7/31/2008
I love this ending better than the other ending. Great job!
thatisadorable chapter 1 . 6/2/2008
really cute
Angel Monroe chapter 1 . 4/8/2008
If only, if only. I like the way you right, how it's more about description than dialogue, which is something I don't do nearly so well. It allows the reader to see more instead of just hearing it. Showing instead of telling, as my professors always say. I was never very good at that, so I'm glad I found an Office FF writer who is. Thanks. O:)
healingmirth chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
loved this - silly and heartfelt and simple and complicated and perfect :)
KBecks87 chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
really good
Cold Flat Coke chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
I don't usually go for the songfic, but I actually liked this, probably because the song wasn't heavy-handed or overlong; just a line at a time to give the story a bit of structure and guidance. It was nice!
literaryfreak chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Ah, quite satisfying. Cute, cute!
Cellar Door 26 chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
So CUTE. The caps lock were needed it was so CUTE. I love this. The writing, the style, the plot, just everything.
MonkeyPajamas chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
i just watched basketball yesterday. it was so good seeing all of pam's reactions to jim and roy, knowing what i know now (of course, i first watched it in october, but still). this was really interesting. she should tell roy and kiss jim again. a lot