Reviews for AURORA
jackie mcneal chapter 1 . 7/1/2000
Hi read your story aurora it was very good

I like your writing your very good I hope you write more storys. Have a nice 4 of july from jackie
IngridSarah chapter 1 . 6/26/2000
Better than the first, for the most part. You have a real knack for Angel and Wesley scenes & Your turns of phrase add a touch of the sublime ("plagued by allergies," "dropped into a vision," "universe had grown bored"). I'm still a little confused about timelines here, but I think it's just because I read the other stories in this sequence so long ago.
IngridSarah chapter 1 . 6/26/2000
Took me a couple tries to get through the whole thing just because it's such an epic- i didn't want to misunderstand anything... As usual, you're doing a great job of constructing a grand machine of fate (wonderful for grinding up the characters and squeezing out the angst) out of your own interwoven plots. Particularly enjoyable was Angel's collapse near the middle as well as Wesley's "deserv(ing) it...for a while longer." Angel's breakdown at the end raised interesting questions that I can't wait to read about in the next part.