Reviews for Charlene and The Chocolate Factory
hateme101 chapter 9 . 5/18
I like this but why do you keep changing the font? I would understand if its a thought or a flashback of some kind but its not. The font just changes all a sudden
BryannaB709 chapter 18 . 4/30
Awww... I'm sorry, I couldn't finish the story, and then I wasn't at the computer for nearly a week!
Still love the story!
BryannaB709 chapter 17 . 4/23
I love your use of those lyrics in this chapter!
However, you might want to credit Disney for them, I just don't want you to get flamed!
BryannaB709 chapter 16 . 4/23
fluff fluff fluffity fluff :)
BryannaB709 chapter 15 . 4/23
Awww...
Sorry, I need to come up with a different response!
But it describes this story so well;
Just awww...
BryannaB709 chapter 14 . 4/23
Awww... *blush*
So cute!
BryannaB709 chapter 13 . 4/23
That was great! I like this turn of events!
That was an amazing idea, having Veruca push Charlene into the Chocolate River! I mean, it obviously was not a pleasant experience for Charlene, but it developed the story pretty well!
Kudos!
BryannaB709 chapter 12 . 4/23
Wow. That was great!
BryannaB709 chapter 11 . 4/23
Okay, I really didn't see that coming!
Good twist, though.
BryannaB709 chapter 10 . 4/23
I love this story!
Just lovely!
BryannaB709 chapter 9 . 4/23
I know that I'm not the only one who thought it was absolutely adorable how Charlene clings onto Willy's arm on the boat ride!
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:)
BryannaB709 chapter 8 . 4/23
I love it how he just unconsciously keeps close to her.
They're just drawn together!
BryannaB709 chapter 7 . 4/23
I love how Willy softens his voice when he gets to Charlene with the names.
Willy/OC forever! :)
BryannaB709 chapter 6 . 4/23
Adorable!
I love the detail you added about her earings being the ones her mother wore at her first date!
BryannaB709 chapter 5 . 4/23
Awww... sorry, I just love Charlene. Very well written character!
Kudos to you!
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