Hey, guess who! Thats right, tis Redtail Rathan.

I'm REALLY sorry this took so long. I'm sitting in Iraq right now. My unit got deployed. Anyways...

Where is Chapter 14? I get all hooah reading Chapter 13, want to read Chapter 14, but its not there...

Write a Chapter 14? Please? For the Soldier in Iraq?

Now for my critique...

You stuck Present-day Eli with Future Eli, just they don't know it yet. That's so...I can't think of the word. But I do know that you can seriously mess with Present-day Eli's mind. Or the Romulans. Make 'em see double. Freak them out.

She lost her IDIC pendant? Aww. That sucks. But hey, they got out to the cell.

So when does Sorick beat the ever loving sh** out of Jergon? After all, I did say earlier that Vulcan's are steel walls, and Klingons are tanks. I still say that Sorick can do some serious damage.

And as for Rathana, she actually kinda sounds like me. Although I suck at math...But still. The way she is when she gets annoyed. It made me laugh. But about her idea...I'm kinda curious about what kind of damage her and her companion are going to cause when they get ahold of the main computer. hehehe. Makes me think evil thoughts...

Now write Chapter 14! Or I will bring down the wrath of the Borg down upon ye!

~Redtail Rathan~

I loved it! The only charactor I have a little problem with is Sorick, a Vulcan/Klingon hybrid. Now, that is deep, mon ( Yes, I mean "mon" ). I don't even want to "touch" what went on to produce that mix! I also love the Bajoran girl that was rescued. I love spunky charactors! I can't wait for the next installment to see what kind of trouble our heroine gets herself into, and gets out of! Hope I'm not giving away too much of the story. . . . . Keep up the good work!

O! Nice. Though the shortness of the chapter was a bit disappointing, still. Twas good.

Rathana? Where did her name come from I wonder...XD

\Anyway, I apologise for my extended absence. I had to finish validating my Medic skills. I am now officially a Medic in the United States Army. Yay!

I'll try to keep reading your work, but don't get discouraged if I don't review for a while. Keep up the good work. Live long and prosper my friend.

¥¥Redtail Rathan¥¥

Soldier Medic...Warrior Spirit.

Thanks for updating! Trust Sorick to do something like that...Happy writing!

It's a tad confusing, as temporal mechanics alwys is...good chapter though. Happy writing!

Oh...My head hurts...I'm attempting to get it straight in my brain...Nope, it's not working. lol! Brilliant, btw. Oh, and you'd better get our Eli back with our PLV(Pretty Little Vulcan)! Aw, he's so cute...!

Haha! Way to go! USE THOSE BIBLE TACTICS, ELI! I love this chapter! It reminds me so much of Paul and Sylis that I wanna cry! Good job!

Eli's so cool! But is her name pronounced "Ell-ee" or "Ee-lie"? If it's the latter...isn't that a boy's name? Anyway, she's really cool, but it's my opinion that you should make her feel more like a real person. Or maybe it's that you've made her TOO real...IDK, but yeah. THAT DOCTOR SOUNDS SO SHMEXY!

I don't mind that it is once a month, it gives me less headaches when I try to catch up! Thanks for the update(boy do they have a problem on their hands) and Happy writing!

Just sped read the first eight chappies. Great work! Love Eli. Happy writing!

Great Updates! I hope you post more chapters about Eli soon.

-Lilith Kayden

Luckily for me, I read Q-Squared, so I'm used to jumping timelines. And you just ruined the future for me. Meh.

Sorick and Eli. Why am I not suprised. XD

Yo, you still need a ship name.

So yea.

¥¥Redtail Rathan¥¥

Yea, you better explain. Vulcans...don't kiss. No emotion. And Klingons don't either. So I'm guessing you have something planned.

And you lost me. What was all that about drinking? Code? I remember Picard, Worf, Data, and Troi using old Earth fables like pinochio (sp) and Cinderella. along with Darmok and jhilad as a code to make sure the people listening in wouldn't catch it. So my guess is code of some sort. I had a guess that the ale behind the mirror ment a phaser hidden there. But hey, I don't know, you do.

So yea.

Hi.

(Busy watching Star Trek IV: The Voyage Home.)

¥¥Redtail Rathan¥¥

I do hope that you ae able to Update your story soon.

-Lilith Kayden

heh liked the first part, i wonder how many other people have stashes of beer...

I will be waiting for the next chapter, till then

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~Tosann