|Reviews for Turning and Returning|
| Blue Phoenix 217 chapter 6 . 1/2/2013
Update soon? x
| Anime Fan 4 life chapter 1 . 2/21/2012
it's been at least... [thinking]...
a month and 1/2 since I read this
because well ~ it was really hard to find
since I finaly found it again
(were you trying to hide it from me?)
I was just gonna tell you the
"I hope you update soon"
| Anime Fan 4 life chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
have you lost your mind?
you haven't updated since then?
update once you find this story again...
(I hope you didn't forget it/this)
| wild wolf free17 chapter 6 . 5/18/2008
Oh, please to be continuing this!
| black lady knight chapter 6 . 3/18/2008
| PlonkerOnDaLoose chapter 6 . 1/22/2008
pyro and toad truly have to be the best characters ever (hopefully not as a pairing, though, Brits and Aussies don't mix, that I would know). you write amazingly and the only thing that I could possibly ever say in critcism to either of the two stories of yours that I have read is: WHERE THE FUCK ARE THE IRISH MUTANTS! We have a right to a mutant! Gr! (maybe I shall write to marvel comics, hmm?)
| Jeune Chat chapter 6 . 1/14/2008
I really liked the bit at the end, where John could forget all his pain with the reclaiming of his powers for himself. Just seeing him being able to BE himself for the first time since we've really seen him in this story was pretty moving.
I have a bit of a medical background, so the substitute of cold for electricty in restarting John's heart kind of made me scratch my head, but that wasn't really the point of that scene. The point was Bobby ever-so-absentmindedly caressing John's chest. (Hot!)
I also really liked Bobby's pointed realization that he's not in Kansas anymore, and he really has no way to get back over the rainbow. His best friend is hurt and barely been dragged back from death, and how exactly would he explain going willingly along with the enemy? He's stuck in a cage of partially his own making, and there's no real good way of returning to the status quo. That's going to make the subsequent chapters very, very interesting indeed.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this unfolds.
| banjarak chapter 6 . 1/8/2008
OMG please continue... I love bobby/john .
| Sanctum of Insanity chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Soon as I saw the summary, I was like...xD I LOVE this pairing! Second favorite for X-Men, I think. So um, anyways, you're doing a good job playing out there emotions and all (I'm reviewing for all the chapters so far), so keep up the good work!
| darkchild chapter 6 . 12/2/2007
Please update as soon as possible_...
| JustAnAmateur chapter 6 . 11/25/2007
It seems you like long reviews...well,that was me at the past but I never wrote long reviews after a certain incident...anyways,I'll try.
What I like...I guess when Mystique said something in a certain language,it's very mysterious and fun to know what is the real meaning of it...'if' you decided to reveal what she's saying to make Azreal that less of a crude.
What I don't like the most,I'm glad you asked...it's that stupid way of saying "I’m aiming for a clean ten reviews on this one".Ooh!I'm feeling so bubbly and sarcastic today I'll just say that YOU...focus!YOU should write a story that YOU like and felt happy about it even without reviews cause the best reward is satisfaction...I'm guess you're more experienced that me so I'm in no place to speak in such a manner and it meant no harm so don't take it the wrong way.
Overall,as an X-Play host(in my dreams),I'll give this nearly perfect piece of craft by YOU a 4.6 out of 5.
Good luck with your next chapter... I repeat,don't take it the wrong way,I'm just had a sudden outburst but I'll say sorry just in case you got mad or something.
| JustAnAmateur chapter 5 . 11/25/2007
Yes,it's definitely complicated for my low level of understanding...but still fun to read.
Not much to say...I believe I said giving you an answer at the next chapter so prepare for the worst...of the best.
| JustAnAmateur chapter 4 . 11/25/2007
...it seems like 'more than one sentence in a review' is your motto...I agree,sometimes I hated it when a review is less than 3 words.
I think I like the part of that new guy...I forgot his name but it's definitely fresh,it's nice to put an original character.
I must say that the answer can be given at chapter 6.
| JustAnAmateur chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
...well...it's likable...that's all I could say for now...I'll just read the next chapter.
| rry chapter 6 . 11/6/2007
I. Love. It. ...there, that was three. ...AH! LOVE IT! PYRO! YOU'RE AWAKE! YAYAYAYAYAY! loves! LUHVE!