Reviews for Perversion
MiyakoHasegawa chapter 1 . 8/8/2007
Interesting story. Hot little games they played (glad I'm not the only one wondering about the final whereabouts of the salt shaker). I'm sad it ended that way. All in all, it's a good read!
Captain Cheese chapter 1 . 6/11/2007
So he died? And Ls still got the salt thing shoved up his ass haha

interesting story -
sixbynine chapter 1 . 5/17/2007
wow nice story:D just one question...is the salt shaker still in there? i mean thats gotta be pretty hard to get out...
Kalessin chapter 1 . 4/30/2007
...The perverted horrible person that I am, I loved this. Nice ending... hehe, THAT'LL scar L.
Emerald Gaze chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
...so raito kill himself then...ok unexpected...!-_-"!
Grimmijn chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
If you didn't like the Ending why did you write it
Kylin-chan chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
OMG you Killed LIGHT you are so friken AWSOME. i HATE the ending But LOve the story!
Spamilla chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Not bad, the ending was a bit sad. However, that was one way to prove he wasn't Kira. Lol, except I couldn't see Raito killing himself.

Nice job!
Sweetciel chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
WTF!N0o0o0o0o0
She.Drowned.In.Venom chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
What the hell? That was the WEIRDEST ending of a smut fanfic I've EVER read! Don't get me wrong, oddly enough, most of their little games were kinda turnin me on, but, WHAT THE FUCK is with the end? He was so desperate to prove he wasn't Kira, even though he is, that he KILLED himself? Holy SHIT!
Enma Ai chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
i like this, sexy scenario

a masochist L forcing a normal Raito to play sadist, interesting .

i'm jus wondering about the salt shaker..does it come out later _