Reviews for Artifice
Elliac Sivad chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
That was, that was... MAGICAL! I have never had so many emotoins about one story in my entire life! It had love, magic, tradey, a happy ending and it was a yaoi fanfic to top it all off! I started reading this at 12:30 a.m. Saturday night until 10:54 a.m. Sunday morning! The reason it took that long to read it was because I would always jump out of my chair and do a MEGA fangirl scream at the lovey dove scenes. My cousin yelled at me and once even came out of her room and threw a pillow at me. I just flipped her off and said 'Can't you see I'm having a moment here!', and then she said 'I don't give a fuch about your "moment", I'm trying to get some sleep! NOW SHUT THE HELL UP!'. I didn't quite down a bit after she went back to her room. Oh, and the poetic language you used made me feel like I was right there watching them the whole time! Well anyway, Best Story Ever! Soooo going on my favorites list. And I'm happy to say that you, my dear genius, will be going to my favorite authors list. Congradulations on your great acomplishment! U
Brie92 chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
that was cute
KawaiiKilala77 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Wow what a spectacular fic. I love it. -
Roxyyyyy chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
After All That Reading... I Now Know! KNOW! That This Is THE BEST FANFIC Ive Ever Read In My Entire Life! Love This Story So Much! Best Story EVER! xDDD
random alias chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
this was such a sweet story i really enjoyed it :)
to lazy to sign in chapter 1 . 6/11/2009
Awesome story!
sana-chan9 chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
OMG

AW!

that was so cute!

i like how you made riku the magician

cause he's all "whosh" LOL

i don't know how to explain it

but this was awesome

D
scarredvines chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Oh yay, happier ending! I'm a sucker for a happy ending. 'Specially since the last story I read was sad...And I feel like slapping Kairi. I know people are prejudice against gays, but it still makes me incredibly angry. -Silver
Sunburned-Stickperson chapter 1 . 2/26/2008
That was great. I really enjoyed how you put the magic to good use. That was truely a great story. I love the way you brought up the facts about boy relationships/magic and how they're viewed in society. It was very true. I absolutely loved it.
Scootkadoot chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
This story made my day. X3 I absolutely love your writing style. ;w;
ComingTempest chapter 1 . 12/27/2007
Oh my god. This was so incredibly good. I'm like on a rampage right now, reading all of your stuff. Wow I sound like a complete loser... Well anyways. All of this rikusora stuff is definetly cheering me up through my boredom during the break :)
Sorakun4ever chapter 1 . 12/20/2007
Love
NeuroticSeduction chapter 1 . 12/10/2007
Geeze, cait. You scared the crap outta me! but I rly loved it. this is my favorite oneshot of yours so far. :3

-NS
The Frog Lady 88 chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
This is just so cute and sweet and magic!

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story with us!
pfeekin chapter 1 . 11/29/2007
Wonderful one shot, I for one was glad it was long. I'm sad Leon had to be one of the "bad-guys" but I'll live. Congratulations on your first lemon, at least, I consider it something to be congratulated.
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