Reviews for Back In Your Arms |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i'm glad that your going to be updating again soon cause this is such a cool story. so are serena's friends going to try to think up so plans to try to convince her family to let her stay? i would think that if they show enough suport that it might break them down. or if that fails, they could just pick-up and move to be close to where she is. please keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really loved your story and hope you will update soon because I am very impatient! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! please update as soon as you can(if you get your word working ;) ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bah, moving is such a b!tch. I like where you're going with this. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh this good. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! keep going.. im still typing out chapter 3 of mine and my exams are next week... maybe i'll post after 2-3 weeks |
![]() ![]() ![]() Veryy good i like it:) please new chapter soon! i hate cliffhangers |
![]() ![]() ![]() gr... i hate cliffhangers..great story !11 |
![]() ![]() ![]() sounds like a great story update soon please thanks |
![]() ![]() ![]() so far so good, its a fairly interesting story. but the cliffhanger is brutle! got to know what happens next! can't serena stay with raye and finish out the school year? I would think that darien might propse to her when he gets back before he hears of the move. i would think that after hearing the news of her moiving, he follow her family and move where ever she ended up just be be close to her. please keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, your story's good too!cant wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It seems pretty good so far. The only thing that i see as unecessary is when Darien is telling Rei his is coming back. You don't need him to say that he was coming back tomorrow twice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty good so far..make chaps longer... |