|Reviews for Killing Two Lovers with One Lie|
| ThorinKiliandFili4ever chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
A great story. Very well written.
| Flourescent Grey chapter 1 . 6/22/2007
A perfect window into Edward's mind. :] I wish you had written more you should! Seriously.
The only thing I have to "critique" is your comma use. For instance, when you say "warm, inviting, creatures" I was taught it should be "warm, inviting creatures" because both "warm" and "inviting" are modifying "creatures," and you don't put a comma after the last adjective. Yes, I am aware that I am a nit-picky idiot, but yeah. I thought I'd give you a head's up on that.
| Annie and Bella chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Oh wow...That's...-sniff- REALLY GOOD! It's so touching...in a kind of sad and depressing way...but that's beside the point! This is REALLY good so far! You have to continue. And for your first fanfic? 'WOW' is pretty much all I can say.
Please, PLEASE do continue...! :D