Reviews for In Pieces
SchemingAlchemist chapter 3 . 11/17/2009
Aww, poor Mustang. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Kai Isolated chapter 2 . 5/10/2007
huhuhuhu.. like the first scene! (but not quite fond of the end) - oh well! next chap yea!

~when Logic meets Art~

-kai Isolated-
Kai Isolated chapter 1 . 5/10/2007
AW... SO SWEET... Okay.. liking this..

~when Logic meets Art~

-Kai Isolated-
LavenderSkies chapter 3 . 4/14/2007
This is pretty good so far. Definitely a lot of angst, but the pieces of humor in between are great: “...you're shooting words at us instead of bullets...PLEASE DON'T REACH FOR YOUR SIDEARM!” Haha! That one had me rolling. D

I love the way you describe things...like Roy's thoughts on Riza's smells and her apartment in the opening. It expresses a lot. D
Lili chapter 3 . 3/28/2007
I can see where you're heading from here. I hope you'll continue after his return from the North...
Legendary Chimera chapter 3 . 3/27/2007
I'm curious, do go on.
Roy Mustang 08 chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
The chapter was great update soon
Causmicfire chapter 3 . 3/27/2007
This is a very interesting fic so far. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
Causmicfire chapter 2 . 3/27/2007
I love the little detial in there about Mustang asking the team answers to his crossword.
Causmicfire chapter 1 . 3/27/2007
Nicely done, those last three words give quite the impact.
words without chapter 3 . 3/27/2007
"Time crawled by without her and then it stood still when she walked through the door." Love that line. The whole thing's very good but that line jumped out at me.