Reviews for Origins
RikiTiki chapter 1 . 10/13/2011
Fantastic! This is a wonderful alternative to the V:TM mythos. I thought your telling of it was absolutely superb. The language evoked the pace and tone of myth, and the story itself is compelling. I hope that you repost the story that this belongs to, I would love to read the whole thing.
Lazbiker26 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
This a great story! I love the history you put in it, and was wondering if I might borrow it for a fic I'm working on. If that's alright w/you, please e-mail me. I will give you the credit in my fic, and encourage others to read this wonderful story.
anon chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Cool, Lilith, in the Bible was Adam's first wife and she wanted to be equal to him and she was turned into a demon. It is not uncommon for her to be "Eve" of vampires in fiction but this was still cool