Reviews for Hourglass
csmamj chapter 6 . 10/31/2007
Okay...so where's the sequel? I'm WAY excited!
prophet144 chapter 6 . 9/12/2007
Good story and you kept it along with how the characters were on the show. I tried to write Heat a few times, but it always ended up out of character so I stopped. Can't wait for the sequel.
iansmom chapter 6 . 5/16/2007
This was great, I can't wait for the sequel. Wonderful job!
csmamj chapter 4 . 5/8/2007
You're KILLING me! New rule...you have to submit at least 2 chapters at a time! This is great.
AnneWithane chapter 3 . 4/29/2007
Okay, whoa! That twist I was not expecting!

You can't just leave the story here? Yikes!

:-) Great job! I'm very much involved in this story and trying to figure out whodunit...you've sucked me right into the action.

There will be more, yes?
AnneWithane chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Wonderful opening! I like the way you waited until the end of the prologue to tie in the title of the story...and very neatly tie it in at that. Great tension in this first bit...I understand the pressure Lonnie is putting on himself in this situation.

I can't wait to find out what happens next! Great job! :-)
iansmom chapter 3 . 4/28/2007
Another good chapter. Keep up the good work, there aren't enough Heat stories on here, or anywhere else for that matter!
csmamj chapter 2 . 4/27/2007
Great Chapter 2! This is really good! So you're working on 3, right?
iansmom chapter 2 . 4/27/2007
Good chapter. I can't wait to see where this story goes.
csmamj chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
More Hugh! YEAH! This is good, hurry up and finish!
iansmom chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
Good story so far. Keep it up, I want to see where this goes.