|Reviews for Together We Stand|
| purehalo chapter 4 . 3/31/2007
I love that Dean calls the road a 'crease'
Such a cool story and i love the way the two brothers kept an eye on each other
no pressure or anything...but whens the next story due? LOL!
| purehalo chapter 3 . 3/31/2007
The brothers banter is s funny! And that image of Dean all bloodied and tied up has me running back to the porn thread!
| purehalo chapter 2 . 3/31/2007
A cliffhanger? Thank god theres another chapter!
The tension was built so well in this chapter and i like how you alternated between the two brothers thoughts.
| purehalo chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
I love the way you started this! Right into the snarky banter!
And i've just noticed it's a complete fic so i get to read all in one go! LOL!
Onto the next chappy!
| Jennygeee chapter 4 . 3/30/2007
Dude! You wanna give some sort of warning when you're about to do an emergency stop?” said Dean sounding annoyed. Lol I love the banter between the boys you have a lovely way of writing it, it always makes me smile.
“Hey, you were the one took my car down a crease.” said Dean, reigniting the argument they'd started so many hours ago.
“It's a road, and I am not having this conversation with you again Dean - keys!” said Sam firmly. There’s that crease again! That really makes me chuckle!
That was great I really enjoyed reading it!
| Jennygeee chapter 3 . 3/30/2007
Isn’t that typical of Dean to attract the danger away from Sam? That was a good idea of his though, getting the Wendigo to cut the ropes for him, dangerous but clever, foolhardy but brave!
| Jennygeee chapter 2 . 3/30/2007
I loved the bit in the first chapter about the map and Dean saying they were following a crack! That was so funny!
Now they are both in trouble!
| Jennygeee chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
Sorry I haven't reviewed this - I have read it all but wasn't able to review when I read it so I will leave a review for each chapter now!
| Ciya chapter 4 . 3/30/2007
Just be glad potholes don't like Impala's Dean. Great story, they both get caught and have to help each other get loose and kill the bad critter.
| Rhesa chapter 4 . 3/30/2007
Another enjoyable story. Your fics are always entertaining, with good doses of humour, snark, excitement, and lovely sweet brother moments. I also love that you are so prolific and don't make us wait long between updates. Please keep the stories coming, and thanks for the entertainment.
| TammiTam chapter 3 . 3/30/2007
Despite the severity of the situation, a few things had me cracking up royally!
He wondered just how weird your family was when being captured by the same killer monster was actually considered an improvement on your day.
“You mean apart from being tied up in the pitch black about to become Wendigo food?”
“Do you have to piss off everything that's trying to kill you?”
And finally, a Dean one:
“What the hell is with the ropes anyway? And how does it tie such good knots with the whole Edward Scissorhands thing going on? I mean, where does it get them? Is there some Wendigo hardware store out there somewhere? 'Never have to worry about your dinner wandering off by itself! No more chasing your entrée!' It's ridiculous – like the damn thing doesn't have enough of an advantage with the talons and the sharp teeth, now it's gotta have equipment too!”
Really had me rolling. Most try hard for the banter but don't always succeed. You, my dear, got it down.
| ziggy.uk chapter 4 . 3/30/2007
Just loved that final chapter, full of humour and the boys banter! And Dean grudgingly letting Sam drive "Just watch the damn potholes ok? She's not an off road car, remember." And Sam with "The relationship you have with this car is not healthy Dean -really."! At least they both realise that the things going on around them like their Dads death has affected their hunting, they had become a bit sloppy and the close shave with the Wendigo brought it home that they need to research more and be way better prepared as neither one could bear to lose the other! Can just imagine Dean trying to make Sam clean the car once they are back at the motel, and Sam desperately trying to get out of it!
Great story, loved every word, the whole thing played out in my mind as I read it! Can't wait for your next story now!
| pandora jazz chapter 4 . 3/29/2007
All one can do is smile as chapters disappear...
I read chapter 4 before I could get 3 to appear and than read 4 again.
You have really captured Dean and Sam's voices and thoughts.
Love how even as Dean and Sam were hanging from the ceiling they were just glad to be together. It was nice that Dean was honest about his injuries, but as Sam thought, if Dean was seriously hurt, he would never tell.
Of course Dean would keep the attention of the Wendigo off Sam, big brother mode kicking in, yet Sam's little brother mode is nothing to be messed with as he torched the creature.
The fact the brothers rarely fight is what I love about them. I don't enjoy the episodes where their words or actions hurt one another.
Loved Sam's thoughts at the end, 'they'd been through so much already and they'd survived it together. As long as they remembered that, they could face whatever the future might bring.'
Can just hear Dean's comments as Sam tries to miss the pot holes.
Thanks again for sharing another story with us.
Until next time, take care.
| may7fic chapter 4 . 3/29/2007
What a thoroughly enjoyable story. Loved the brotherly banter - so in character. They truly are a dynamic duo!
| alwaysateen chapter 4 . 3/29/2007
Great story. Our boys weren't too hurt in this one, a good change. Ya, the Dean's girl in me can make a few concessions.
Great job, as usual.