Reviews for Five minutes to midnight
neva-chanluvsmonsters101 chapter 5 . 6/20/2012
FHFHFHFHFBFHDBEJ WRITE WOMAN WRITE! I LOVE THIS STORY!
Rose.Massimo chapter 5 . 4/4/2012
Will you update soon? :D That sounds fantastic! This story looks interesting.

Note: I am sorry for my English, but I really am a spanish speaker. :)

Hugs, Rose.
Dontmezwitme chapter 3 . 7/13/2008
hi.I'm doing this for the sake of doing this
Dontmezwitme chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
hi.
dosoalsd9iak chapter 4 . 2/17/2008
I was completley hooked to this story(And might i say that hook was painful) and if you dont write more i will use my magical hammer! I liked your disclaimer too. Which reminds me, write more of youre questions and answers story too. Well, i'll be chacking ALL THE TIME for more, so write more! Try improving your grammer (My only bit of con-criticism today)but it was easy to understand anyway.

Toodles,

Jojo
Icy Mystery chapter 4 . 7/23/2007
This was great! Please update soon!
Jesus-Freak-For-Ever chapter 4 . 6/13/2007
Nice chapter. Making up unusual names is fun.
Jesus-Freak-For-Ever chapter 2 . 6/13/2007
A great second chapter.
Jesus-Freak-For-Ever chapter 1 . 6/13/2007
So far a nice fanfic.
LuvtoWrite chapter 4 . 5/15/2007
Hahaha, I liked your answers to the reviews, they were funny, Lol! I'm not exactly sure how you can hear a story...it's like magic! haha, I still like the story, I think it's really cool...a bit repetitive, but oh well. D I am amused easily D
The Blue Falcon chapter 4 . 5/14/2007
LOL-loved it! Great Chapter-Write More!
The Blue Falcon chapter 1 . 5/14/2007
Interesting...
pinkpears chapter 3 . 5/12/2007
it's good, please update it soon, one thing about the grammar. when you say "The two siblings were walking down a street, holding a gelati in thier hands" and "Neil complained while licking his Vanilla gelati" and anywhere else you say gelati, it implies/means more than one gelato, as if they both had two or more gelatos in their hands. instead of gelati, it should be gelato. just if they both do have more than one you change "a gelati" to "some gelati" or something like that.
joyfulangel319 chapter 3 . 4/16/2007
YOU are so FUNNY!

Kayla and Neil sound just like me and my siblings... We always jump on each other and stuff to wake the other one up...

You answered the questions the way my older sister would... humor and sarcasm! I love it...
joyfulangel319 chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
Good chapter! You've already asked all the questions that I was thinking of!

There are a couple typos. I found a few when the boy is waking his sister. And I'm confused by this sentence, "He would've fallen down the bed hadn't he controled his balance." "The boy, jumped off the girl's bed..."

Can't wait to read more!
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