Hey i wanted to ask if i could continue this story. Its so well done. As this was made in 2007 im not sure if you would be able to see this but i would like to continue a story as good as this.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. You do a great job of portraying a dark Harry who is a product of his upbringing yet is not innately evil. He is not new to violence and hate, just forced to be the victim til magic enters his life. Thank you so much. I assume your life has taken some turns that have drawn you from your love of writing. I noticed frim your comments that you already had plans for this one’s continuation. I hope you come back to it some day. I would love to see how you take it forward. Thank you!

This is what is irritating about all the CoS works I've ever read. Everyone coddles that old criminal Dumbledore and allows him to keep the diary that, in this case, the idiotic, weakling Harry you created managed to win from Riddle, thanks to the snake who is far more intelligent that he is. Dumbledore has no claim on that diary. How does Dumbledore gain reinstatement when he did nothing to earn it? The school was well rid of that bum, and the Govs should rid themselves of McGonagall as well.

Hate it. A disjointed hodgepodge. A clusterfuck worthy of JKR. Harry had one job, and he failed.

What is a tonuge, as used in parseltonuge? Also, what is 'eluded too', same paragraph? Do you mean 'alluded to'? The distinctions amongst to, too and two are usually taught and mastered in elementary school.

At least Flint has his priorities right!

The boy is such a Slytherin he has all of you convinced he isn't.
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Great line!

Not much to say except i like it!
Canon Harry is too nice for someone abused for a decade
Well done!

lol another trash fic

this is the first time I accept a harry is a metamorphmagist because you actually introduced it well

Love it is there a pt 2?

tonks's father is a muggers and his mother's a muggers born, his attitude is really unrealistic even with his horrible experiences, like he also mentioned other kids with loving parents so why would he think they all deserve death

Interesting... but so sad... In this story Harry discovers he's pure-blood and instantly becomes an opinionated inbred bigot... (Oh, a few Muggles were bad to me - that means the other 5 billion muggles on the planet are EVIL!)
The Dark Lord says he's not a bad guy... must be true! Just because even if he murdered my parents and tried to murder me don't mean he tells lies, do it?
Hey Potter? I have the deeds to the tower of London and Windsor Castle... I'll give you a good deal... Oh, and here... this stone keeps Lions away, just 10g to you... Does it work? of course it works... I've had it ten years and I've never had a lion chase me down the street yet...
Harry? Did you know GULIBLE is the only word they left out the dictionary? Look it up, it's not there...
Harry James Potter - So stupid he makes the villiage idiot shake his head in wonder.

Imo it's misleading to mark a story complete after posting only a minor part of it. Typing part 1, part 2 part 3 is no excuse. Intent to finish the story is NOT the same as actually finishing it.

How is this Harry cunning enough to be in Slytherin? What's the point in having a disguise just to tell it to the first person he meets? And for someone who's scared of the goblins knowing about his home life, he just says he hates muggles to the first boy he meets? makes no sense at all