Reviews for Dark Lord Potter Part 1
Guest chapter 1 . 9/4/2018
This goes to show just how incompetent the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder truly is. He deludes himself at best that Harry is safe and loved. At worst, he deliberately placed Harry in an abusive home. I'm going with option two as he was warned by McGonagall that it was an unfit home for Harry. But as usual he listened only to himself. Now Harry has to suffer for his blunders.
BorderLand chapter 10 . 9/4/2018
Damn, Harry is such a good Slytherin, I should feel bad because he is such a little evil first year but than again he is having fun so who am I to judge.
BorderLand chapter 7 . 9/4/2018
Yep pretty sure Dumbledore was in fact Slytherin and asked the hat to sort him in Gryffindor.
Csar chapter 12 . 8/31/2018
I'm really enjoying the story. The plot is interesting and the characters have an original view. The only slight criticism would be to your grammar and word choice. For example, I think the word you were looking for is prodigy (think Mozart with music), a protégé is someone who is sponsored or taught by someone, kind of like a favored apprentice.
Guest chapter 26 . 8/17/2018
This story was amazing and I wish I could find the sequel
Mindmaze chapter 15 . 7/28/2018
Okay you redeemed Tonks for me. Don't know how but you did it. I thinks it's my empathy for her situation and the fact that while it would be easier to to stop being friends with Harry and Draco she is set in her loyalty to them... just wow. I love the drama. In fact some of your best moments are when Harry is away from Hogwarts because your originality has a chance to shine. I just thought I'd let you know I really enjoyed this chapter.
Mindmaze chapter 12 . 7/28/2018
I hate Tonks. Seriously if she wants to save Hermione she should have went herself. So much for the house of the brave she sent Harry instead. Harry was willing to walk was nothing saying Tonks couldn't have saved her on her own with out Harry like she was originally going to. Instead she emotionally manipulated Harry into doing it. Harry who no matter how gifted is still a year younger than her. She sent a boy a year younger than her, who was her friend into unknown danger she herself was no wiling to face with him and all for a person he didn't even like. Remind me again why she is in Gryffindor. Seriously this on top of their other two conflicts has just made me despise her.

That aside I did enjoy this chapter, though I was hoping Voldemort and your version of Harry would be on the same side I don't mind this either. So I'm guessing he's making his own side then? Separate from Voldemort of Dumbledore? You've got me curious.
Mindmaze chapter 10 . 7/28/2018
I must admit to being a little frustrated that despite all the changes you are making this fic still railroads down into cannon station. I first thought this with the troll incident which seemed unnecessary, the whole situation seemed contrived just so that Harry would be able to defeat the troll like he did n cannon. Now we have the whole dragon incident. Usually I'd say it's because you lack originality but I know that to be false. You've got some wonderfully original content here which is why it saddens me to see it having no effect. The fact there are so many changes means the story should change yet it doesn't.

This is well written well but for one thing I don't understand why Harry goes out of his way personally to get them in trouble, why didn't he hand Ron's letter to Snape? Or if he didn't trust Snapte to take him seriously get Draco to give it to Snape? I#m also at the point where I don't understand why Harry wants to be Tonk's friend, honestly from the way you've characterized him it doesn't fit and at this point she seems more trouble than she's worth. Seriously why did Tons even care, her house only just started treating her well, why would she care if they got in trouble.
Mindmaze chapter 4 . 7/28/2018
Wait a minute though, if Lilly hadn't been adopted she would ave been raised as a pureblood, her ideals, personality/behavior may have been totally different and she may have never fell in love with James/or James her thus Harry may never have been born. So why is he complaining? I get it he's only a 11 but blimey I couldn't help but think get over your self. I do like how your Harry is totally unapologetic of his views, make a refreshing change. Can't wait to see how this stirs the pot. Also can I just say I love how you characterize the Malfoys, all of them just love it.
Scribble Novice chapter 7 . 7/25/2018
Thank You! The best of Slytherins would never be caught dead acting like a Slytherin
JerHat chapter 3 . 6/21/2018
The story was going fine but everything to do with Tonks' father, their talk and reactions are way too over the top. So much disappointment after such a great start. :sad face:
greypilgrim1776 chapter 4 . 6/20/2018
Can't even finish the story before I need to tell you how good this story is! Totally different from any other HP story of this kind I've read before. Good job!
-greypilgrim1776
TheDapperDemon chapter 7 . 6/10/2018
This is absolutely brilliant and has quickly become one of my favorite stories on this entire site. I love having a dark version of Harry, as it seems to be quite rare. All the other stories I've read have either made him a great hero for the light, or at the very worst, neutral to either side. Great job! Keep up the good work
Lilly Caia chapter 8 . 5/19/2018
I'd like to believe it's intended that most of your characters are hugely flawed. A thing I really don't like though is that almost all names are spelled incorrectly somehow. Please check that over or at least avoid it in future stories.
That aside I actually like this story as it's not quite exactly what most people write when introducing Slytherin Harry. You're really good at getting your readers to sympathise with prejudiced people which I admire.
Moi chapter 26 . 5/15/2018
Argh! No, don’t stop THERE! The dreaded cliffhanger!
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