Don't you need to have already killed in order to cast the killing curse? Also, I thought Harry was supposed to be immune to the imperius

ah geeze, little tonks crying like that got me a little teary, myself. You're also doing a good job of humanising the Malfoys. I like that.

you know, every time i read a story in which Harry is abused, i can never understand why he doesn't cruciatus them to death over the span of many months. And excellent story so far; I always search by favourites and follows so I have no idea why I only found it with a reference from another story.

There's a difference between evil and racist, you know

Re eally? He faints? He doesnt care that dumbledork sent students into a forest in the middle of the night? What he care abt though is a friend that spills his secrets and chooses others of him and a game. What happened to the meaner harry? That was interesting. Him ending up in the nurse office as much ad canon, not so interesting. Please dont turn ur mean dark harry into a weak forgiving harry like canon.

No. Just no. I absolutely hate that harry forgave her so easy. Im not sure if i even want to continue this story. Tonks was horrid. Yes harry was mean to granger but tonks knew him better knew his secrets but she didnt think just spouted whatever she want she truly is a Gryffindor. Always thinking of thereselfs no maturity no consideration for others. This chapter left me pissed that he forgave her so easily. All because she cried? She is always crying.

Lmao no wonder you left this website. I liked your other noncompleted story, but this takes the actual cake.

They hear Vernon screaming and beating the shit out of Harry, with Harry screaming in pain, and you have the gall to actually write someone ignoring that? I hope you burn in all seven layers of Hell while you're beaten by your own incompetent characters.

In canon, when Malfoy Sr was given back the diary and about to lose his house elf, there was a flare of grit and again just before a certain house elf banished him.

Your "reveal" of Sr and nee Black's playing of Harry and Tonks wasexceptionally done.

DESSSSTROY THEM LORD OF SSSSNAKESS

So hiving up Salazaar? ToDraco? Absolutely a complete disconnectwith characters. Even Sal would have reminded Harry to hold on to him. Imperio has been done so much by mirror. Early on u thought you might have a whole new idea. Meh. Dull ending since Harry drank potion

Harry / Tonks pls T_T

I really enjoyed this story. I'm adding you to my watch list in case you ever write a sequel.

What? How is this the end? This is not an ending!

Keep going
I am a so I want to see Harry bash
the dursleys and the weasel twins

Great story