Reviews for Dark Lord Potter Part 1
jw chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
great update cant wait to read more
blackruby873 chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
That was exciting
justanotherfan95 chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
Great chapter, update soon! Rating:10/10 :)
Bluesnowman chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
Great work.
Geovanni Luciano chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
That was my argument entirely. This was a rather short chapter. Please update. I did like it however. You could have been a bit more descriptive with the movement of possessed!Quirrell in the forest, however.
floyddickey chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
nice chapter update soon.
David M. Potter chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
Another great chapter! Brilliant
stinkyhead chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
You should also know that she also said that neither Ron, Hermione, or Harry will be the ones to die.
killing u with umbrellas chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
i love it. plz update soon.
spedclass chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
audhumla chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
Awesome chapter!
zerodark9 chapter 11 . 7/15/2007

How far are you going to go with this story, at least in the run? Through the first year or just a continous story till your done?

Anyway I found the grammar and spelling pretty good considering some I've seen, there was a misspelled word here and there though. Do you have a beta-reader?
kubas89 chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
good one :)
Sewpra chapter 11 . 7/15/2007
Didnt really care for this chapter I think it should have been combined with another event not have a chapter by itself not really much information at all in it.
Suzy chapter 8 . 7/15/2007
luv the story but i hope harry doesn't become hermiones friend, i don't think i could stand it if he suddenly apolagised to her and they became friends *grimaces* that would totally suck!
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