Reviews for Dark Lord Potter Part 1
jmsdragn chapter 14 . 7/26/2007
nice chapter ur rite not much in it but eh it needs to be done im sure cant wait for the next update please
Sewpra chapter 14 . 7/26/2007
While it didnt have the most action it was still an interesting chapter. keep up the good work.
KirijamaScion chapter 13 . 7/26/2007
excellent development. please more. soon. please?
Joe chapter 13 . 7/26/2007
I have a feeling that Ginny Weasley won't go to Gryffindor too. Let's see, hm... )

P.S. This fic is one of the best fics I've ever read in my life. Update soon!
Shaggy37 chapter 13 . 7/26/2007
Outstanding chapter! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter. I get this feeling that Draco and Harry and Tonks will be the ones going into the Chamber of Secrets and that maybe Harry might find it without ever having to use the Diary. I also get this feeling that maybe Ginny Weasley wont be going into Gryffindor? Do keep up the outstanding work and update soon please:):):):)
Aoedes Mortis chapter 1 . 7/26/2007
You have started one of the greatest fics in history of HP fanfiction. Don't give up! Continue this astonishing fic, please!

My best regards,

A. M.
Aoedes Mortis chapter 13 . 7/26/2007
It is hard to believe that such amazing authors as you exist. Your work is fantastic! Sorry that I am out of time and I can't review all the chaps now. Update soon, please! I'm fan of this story. Thank you very much for your excellent work!

A. M.
Bluesnowman chapter 13 . 7/25/2007
Good work.
David M. Potter chapter 13 . 7/25/2007
Another great chapter! Bravo
audhumla chapter 13 . 7/25/2007
Great chapter! Update soon...
xXxIzzyxXx chapter 13 . 7/25/2007
I loved your story. I just found it and i have to say i think its one of the best dark harry stories i have read in a long time, though i did notice that the writing improved as the story went along with only a few mistakes. I love the way that it starts with Harry's first year and Tonks being in his year is a great idea and very original. HOpefully it is updated soon. Great story.
KRP chapter 13 . 7/24/2007
yay! 1/7th done. now, 6/7ths of the story to go. question: do you plan to continue updating Dark Lord Potter, or do you plan to start a completely seperate story? either way, rewriting Chamber may prove slightly difficult.

if Draco tells his father about Ginny's reaction, he may choose to give the Diary to someone else. then there's the fact that everyone will (rightly) assume Harry is Slytherin's Heir, seeing that he actually is a slytherin and somewhat plays it up. Last but not least, there's him actually dealing with the problem of the Basilisk. he'd really have little to no reason to want it to stop. using Hermione as Tonks' friend can only go so far.

i wonder what would happen if Harry had the Diary, and it began to posses/drain him. played up or not, i dont think Harry'd be so sympathetic to Voldemort. that could cause him to want to 'take over'. you know, become the next Dark Lord as your title suggests. maybe i keep saying that, but i dont think Voldemort would like another 'Dark Lord' besides himself, and the phrase "there can only be one" sorta sticks here. of course, one could focus on Europe and the other on, say America, and they'd be good :D

well, thats enough for now

see you next chapter.
hpnut1 chapter 13 . 7/24/2007
I think that was one of my favorite chapters so far, great job! I loved the part with Ginny! Update again soon.
Jason chapter 13 . 7/24/2007
one of the best harry potter stories ever, cant wait to see how harry and voldemort react to each other as the years go on
Airlady chapter 13 . 7/24/2007
This is indeed enjoyable. The scene with Ginny was well done.
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