Hmm ... translation ... no ... good fellows translators and Co, but history. No of course that the story is far from over this and is - & , but GG and Co ... NPC ... Like a group of kids playing the role of adults, or adults with mental problems playing the role of children. Constant feelings are not grasped by something. This ephemeral, as in 10 years of figs you will describe even incoherent mooing and waving hands. Harry "Evil" Potter or trying to be . How? ... HOW ? ... the one who all his conscious life did not know "Care and Love" and claiming a reward "Mr. Mistrust", can believe adults and children right away. It seems that at first he burned already on the mother of Nymphadora (who turned back to the Dursleys after seeing how much he was beaten by Harry) and Dudley's friends (who almost beat him to death because Tonks saved him). Should ALWAYS completely distrust anyone, well, except for their peers and younger. Yes, and then not immediately. Always in doubt. Always waiting for a dirty trick. If, according to the canon, "in theory," Harry was badly trusted at first, then in this story he SHOULD be even more paranoid of trust than Moody with his "PERMANENT VOLUNTANCE!". And yes, unconditionally hitting on Slytherin and having previously learned that the Magical World is not a fairy tale and, if a fairy tale, it is cruel. We contemplate giving out trust like Jesus without a doubt about the possibilities to harm him. And it's amazing ...
This is my comment on the Russian site, where the translation of your History lick.
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did anyone notice that chief Horlik sounds like Niall and Zayn last name ship name Horlik

Is there a sequal

"I've never been on a broom before."
"Me either." Tonks said absentmindedly.
Don't first years have flying lessons? Since Tonks is older, she should have at least had those.
Though, it does say she said it absentmindedly, so maybe her brain actually was missing for a moment there?

I need part 2. Come on man I need my fix I'm jonesen over hear

Nympjadora was a hufflepuff

FYI No part two

sorry, the explanation of why Harry doesn't like muggleborn is stupid.
I get it...prejudice isn't logical and it doesn't make any sense, but in this case..I just can't.

The story has been great so far, but I can't go any further

I really enjoyed this fic! And whilst I'm sad that there isn't a follow up (does the Dursley abuse leak out to the press? Do Sirius and Remus come into Harry's life?) I am massively thankful that you wrote this - I read half of it in one day XD

I don't know how to feel about Evil!Harry I just hope he won't abandon Ginny after her sorting. He seems to have at least a shred of decency about him (given his friendship with Tonks and how, while cruel, he did help Hermione for Tonks) so I'm hoping he continues being nice to her.

Best HP fiction I've read thus far would love to read the ending though.

teil 2 ?

Learn to spell pinhead, also your story is crap.

just out of curiosity, if you were making Tonks younger, why not make her the same age as Harry?

Don't mean to be a stickler but difference between the Norman invasion when the Malfoy family came to England and Arthurian Legend is a good 500 or so years