You fixed it! Nice. I can't stop reading!

But Andromeda tonks, and Draco's mom are sisters. Draco, and Nymphadora are cousins.

Love it! I'm just starting, i hope you finish it.

No no no please continue this please it's to Fucking awesome to be left there I hope you decide to make more chapters regards Greekfreek1

I found your story by chance and very happy I did Ive never been a fan of evil harry but grey harry is always fun and strong good harrys as well I hate wussy HP stories. My favorite female has always been tonks then Daphany Green grass then Fluer lastly susan bones the rest I tolerate I hate ron and the rest of the guys have thier places just depends the looking forward for the rest of your story
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Good story.

This was a truly remarkable read. I enjoyed it immensely. The few plot holes and grammar mistakes are small enough for me to ignore. The one thing tough that I felt I truly detested was the change of the relationship between Harry and the mudblood and the end of the story. I had the feel that Harry would never let himself be forced to do something as low as being forced to be friendly with someone he actually detested.

I do hope though that a part 2 would come out one day, and that this little personality change would not be accepted, and throughly crushed by Harry's own willpower.

I thank you for a wonderful read.

Enjoyable read, will there be a sequel on the horizon?

The two previous chapters have been a disappointment .Even though Harry as Fan fiction strives for politics , the character does not move to join various races in the wizengamot nor allot seats .Also the character's blind hatred for muggleborns seems childish without the knowledge of blood genetics in detail .Still one hopes that harry would evolve into a reasonable & cunning individual joining all strata of society .

A truly intriguing fan fiction for Harry Potter .Quite a enjoyable storyline for those wishing to read it .Now it is not any sort of copying from other fanfiction , it is just what if the circumstances & choices of Harry Potter being altered ! Again Fan fiction truly stands for altered choices , doesn't it ? Among it's numerous points?!.The Author has gone quite in depth to outline the various fields in magic , won't be a spoiler , just read it.

Love the story so far, but I'm fairly sure Nymphadora is a Hufflepuff. it's better for the plot if she's a Gryffindor, though ;)

Every time a fic has this detention, I'm just amazed at the sheer stupidity of the staff allowing students, children!, to hunt for something that is killing unicorns. It's downright irresponsible. I'm glad that you at least mentioned how wrong that was.

ih my goodness, you were breaking my heart with Harry and Tonks fighting.

When Harry first transformed, I thought the Gargoyle would be evil. However, it seems to want Harry to treat Hermione better and to react badly against negative comments by Draco, Ginny, and others. It still reacted negatively to Neville and Hermione pushing the issue of Harry's attitudes toward other Muggleborns, though. It will be interesting to see how it influencesandaffects Harry.

It will also be interesting to see what happens to Harry as a result of the knowledge that he gave Hermione the diary. Obviously, he didn't know what the diary was or what it would do. It sounds like Harry has a rough summer ahead.

Good story. I liked the interesting ways you dealt with the key plot points. Very creative. I look forward to seeing how you handle years three and four.

Poor Harry and Tonks. Seeing someone you truly love get injured or become seriously ill while you are in a state of estrangement is extremely scary. For someone like Harry - who considers Tonks his closest friend and probably the only person he loves - it must be devastating, a sick, helpless feeling. The same must be true for Andromeda, who is also estranged from her daughter.

I really don't think the same is true for Ron, as awful as that sounds, because he doesn't own any wrongdoing in his treatment of Ginny. I'm not sure about the twins, as your version of them is quite different from any I've read before.

I wonder if Harry will be pressed into service once again to try and find the Chamber.