Reviews for Dark Lord Potter Part 1
missgsmith51 chapter 4 . 7/28/2016
That was certainly dramatic. I guess the 64,000 Galleon question is whether or not Dumbledore knew Lily was his granddaughter. BTW ... if Lily is adopted, wouldn't that make the vaunted blood wards Dumbledore is always touting completely worthless? If so, then Harry should finally be able to get away from the Dursleys. Unfortunately, won't Dumbledore, as his great-grandfather, have more control over Harry?

Well, with Harry the true Heir of Slytherin by magic and the Heir of Gryffindor by blood, wouldn't that have some impact on Hogwarts, if he decides to exercise his power?

I find myself wondering how this darker Harry will get along with Sirius. He should get along with Umbridge fine ... unfortunately. While I completely understand his hatred of the Dursleys, I hate his blanket condemnation of all Muggles. I hope he changes his ways soon.
missgsmith51 chapter 3 . 7/28/2016
Well, the Malfoys are certainly reeling in Harry and Tonks hook, line, and sinker! I'll bet Andromeda has a Hippogriff when she finds out Tonks has been with them. Harry is bad enough, but he isn't her child. I'm also willing to bet this causes some major friction between mother and daughter, because it sounds like Tonks has been as lonely as Harry and would have loved to know she had extended family. Will Lucy and Narcissa try to lure Tonks away from her mother's ideals? They certainly have done a great job of trashing her father. The resulting explosion promises to be a doozy.
missgsmith51 chapter 2 . 7/28/2016
Well, any secrets Harry was supposed to keep are "pfffft!" now! One of Voldemort's "inner circle" now has lots of critical information about Harry, and he won't hesitate to use it.

Dumbledore will probably have a conniption when he finds out what has been going on, how Harry feels about Muggles (and why), and what he wants to do to his uncle. Quite honestly, I think Dumbledore should be worried, as this Harry seems to be willing to exact revenge for perceived wrongs done to him ... and plenty has been done. Given what has happened to him as a result of Dumbledore's insistence on placing him with the abusive Dursleys, well, I wouldn't want to be Dumbledore. I think he has another budding Dark Lord on his hands, unless he finds a way to neutralize Lucius's influence. Frankly, I don't see that happening unless Dumbledore removes Harry from the abusive Dursleys. Keeping Harry there is only going to deepen his resentment and hatred of them and anyone else who had a hand in him being placed there. I suspect things are going to get very ugly very quickly.
Orion Lightning chapter 26 . 7/26/2016
Loved the story will there be a part 2
NabikiB chapter 18 . 7/16/2016
The Equinox is on the 20th of the month, WORLD WIDE. The 31st is All Hallows, that is NOT the same thing.

The Equinoxes are the days when the length of daylight hours and the length of the night hours are exactly the same, 12 hours each.

The Summer Solstice is the longest continuous number of daylight hours of any day of the year and the shortest night.

The Winter Solstice is the shortest number of continuous daylight hours of any day of the year and the longest night.

These are planetary/solar events.

All Hallows is a traditional, druidic (read that religious) holiday that has nothing to do with ether solstice or equinox.
NabikiB chapter 17 . 7/16/2016
The section wherein 'Dumbledore was 'sighting' several real life...'

The word you want is 'citing', not sighting. Dictionaries are your friends, kiddo. USE them.

sight
[sīt]
NOUN

the faculty or power of seeing:
"Joseph lost his sight as a baby" · [more]
synonyms: eyesight · vision · eyes · faculty of sight · [more]
a thing that one sees or that can be seen:
"John was a familiar sight in the bar for many years" · [more]
(sights)
a device on a gun or optical instrument used for assisting a person's precise aim or observation.

VERB

manage to see or observe (someone or something); catch an initial glimpse of:
"tell me when you sight London Bridge" · [more]
synonyms: glimpse · catch/get a glimpse of · catch sight of · see · [more]
take aim by looking through the sights of a gun:
"she sighted down the barrel"

cite
[sīt]
VERB

quote (a passage, book, or author) as evidence for or justification of an argument or statement, especially in a scholarly work.
synonyms: quote · reproduce · refer to · make reference to · [more]
law
summon (someone) to appear in a court of law:
"the summons cited four of the defendants"
synonyms: summon · summons · serve with a summons · [more]

NOUN

US
a citation.
NabikiB chapter 8 . 7/16/2016
TONGUE, not tonuge
ReinaSense chapter 26 . 7/12/2016
I was read this story in russian translate by SecretHero. It is perfect fanfic! Thank you, author, for wrote this!
licha.s chapter 26 . 7/7/2016
awesome story. i hope you get to write part 2 eventually. i really like it, and really thought i would find it at least the beginning. Any how please post a new chapter here if you do though so i find out. thanks for keeping me entertained for hours.
rigger42 chapter 15 . 5/25/2016
I love how devious he is but it's not very cunning of him to be so overt in his hatred for muggles and muggleborn. I actually wonder if someone is a halfblood who lives in the Muggle world is that the same? He has no choice but other children wouldn't either.
sada chapter 9 . 5/7/2016
Too bad you are making all this mess for Hermione. It was a good think fic until you got all this fluff
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2016
I know it has been 7 years since you wrote this story, but please continue with the next part. This story is fantastic and I for one don't want to see it end. I know that this is probably just a hobby for you and that people on the internet don't have any right to ask things of you, but please continue this story. It is amazing and world you have helped create in the minds of your readers is an incredible thing.

Signed: ;)
myafroatemydog chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
Well this chapter was very interesting though I kinda doubt how ignorant andromeda would be to everything
Fainfan chapter 26 . 3/14/2016
Thanks for this I really appreciate it
Fainfan chapter 18 . 3/13/2016
Loving this. Hope it's a completed work
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