Very well done, I have to say this is my favorite HP fan fiction yet. I love the way the story is written, and how all the plots work together. The final chapters bring everything together nicely, but leaves enough unresolved ready for the sequel.

I know the sequel has been abandoned for years, but if you ever have enough time, I would look forward to reading it. There is so much left that I want to see of this fantastic AU you created!

Why did Harry's opinion of Granger change when he still dislikes muggles and mudbloods?

Love it

Hey, your story is great, but in chapter 2 are 2 mistakes:
1. Draco and tonks are cousins
2. Draco' s wand is made from unicorn hair

I'm definitely troubled by Harry's blanket view of muggles. If the kid is smart, then he should have no problem realizing that the muggles who had made his life hell hardly constitute as a representative sample of the muggle population.

Where do I get the idea that even if Albus didn't know he will play the family card for all he is worth to take as much control of Harry as possible. Yeah sorry not really a big fan of Dumbledore.

I don't think Ted was a coward rather the fact that that didn't know any different. If he wasn't told of the etiquette of the magical world how would he know any different. With thoughts like that it's going be interesting to see what they think of Hermoine.

Interesting Tonksmust not realize that she is related to Draco and vice versa. This Draco doesn't seem as domineering and snobbish as per usual.

So manipulating goat looking for control of a weapon. This should be interesting.

it just barely doesn't flow quite well, and seems just the tiniest bit rushed.
Sorry for the fact that I cant give tips, im a noob writer

Ah where to begin.
I love this story and began reading it knowing that it (or at least it's sequel) has long since been abandoned. I've read your comments on the DLP forums and I understand your reasoning, despite all that (and I'm sure that you get reviews and PMs all the time asking similar things) I really do wish that you would continue this fanfic.
I truly do believe that it's one of the only IC dark Harry fics which isn't slash. Even if it weren't it would still be the best. Please consider returning to writing this or if that's impossible, I would love to know what you had in mind for the rest of the story.
Thank you very much for what you've done so far
Regards
Tom

update this story please! it is amazing! i love reading it

LMAO 'I just boned to that snake'

And then the snake hides under his clothes and 'grows' at odd moments

Priceless typo

gay ass chapter

Loved story. Although I expected Harry to be darker when I read the title. Tried to find the sequel, but no luck... Makes me wonder if you wrote any or abandoned the fic?