Reviews for Dark Lord Potter Part 1
Dark-Prince-of-Clowns chapter 8 . 4/9/2021
...I wonder what it says about me when my first reaction to how Harry could solve the problem with Tonks liking hermione was "Kill Hermione, and make it look like an accident."

That way the mudblood is no longer a problem, and Harry can comfort Tonks and say that even if he didn't like her, he didn't want her dead... and so on.

It seems like the perfect solution to me! _

That aside... Aside from rubbing a bit too close to Mary Sue Harry, this fic is brilliant! ESPECIALLY how he hates muggles and muggleborn!

SO few authors have the guts it takes to write THAT side's viewpoints into a main character!

(Not that I personaly agree with that view, but I understand where they come from. And I LOVE it when people who write a Dark Harry writes him as ACTUALLY Dark... and not just amoral. Predjudices and all.)

Keep writing! _
Joshbbeer chapter 13 . 3/18/2021
Story is good but it’s to inconsistent one second he’s muggle hating and the next he’s kind to them is he is going to be a dark lord then be a proper one
Batmanwolf738 chapter 26 . 3/14/2021
can you post part 2
Guestintaor chapter 14 . 3/12/2021
Yep was right, she is just a worthless bitch with zero character growth or development. She is just there to bitch and cause problems for no reason it seems.
Guestinator chapter 3 . 3/12/2021
Cap lock is bad writing, whoever let you get away with learning that in school failed their job. The all mighty exclamation point exists for a reason.
Guestinator chapter 2 . 3/12/2021
Nope nothing, suppose she is just a horrible bitch that cares not for massive abuse to a minor.
Guestinator chapter 1 . 3/12/2021
Would be Fabulous if she could explain why she gave him back and why she was saying what she did as if she was mind controlled.
Bob chapter 26 . 2/11/2021
Either Pt2, or update. Pls
Clair brite chapter 26 . 1/22/2021
can u post the next book?
Guest chapter 3 . 12/21/2020
Your spelling errors are irritating, as is the all caps and people screaming. I like the idea so far, though, so I'm trying to fight through the irritation. There. You demand reviews, you get to find out what I really think.
Guest chapter 11 . 11/15/2020
This story is awful lol beta Harry is trash
Guest chapter 10 . 11/15/2020
Trash
Guest chapter 8 . 11/15/2020
Yeah this story became trash
Lola Krantz chapter 26 . 11/13/2020
I think this story is wonderful. The only problem I have with it is the first few chapters. The dialog is poor. Most characters shout and over react. But after that the story smooths out and is very good. Keep up the great work.
Lola Krantz chapter 26 . 11/13/2020
I enjoyed this story. I hope you write part 2.
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