Reviews for Wedding Night's Scary!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
Hee hee that's just so kyosuke! A good one! A tickle to the heart! Momo-chan xxx
creamberriess chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
i just find it. i hope you make the continuation of this.. it is really good
Airenee chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
I loved the part where he just gave her the ring and ran away...LOL
magicalnana chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
very cute, but hope you can continue though
Professor Coldheart chapter 1 . 3/29/2013
Cute story. If this is a one shot, you successfully accomplished your goal. If this is the beginning of a story, then nice start, but what happens after, and what problems would they have, and what obstacles would they have to face? You also have the option of making another one shot. For example: You can do a one shot about Miki when she told Kyouske she was pregnant, or a one shot when she tells him her water broke, or a one shot where Kyouske thinks Miki doesn't love him anymore, or a one shot about anything you desire to write about. I really liked it. Good job!
Mayuzu chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Cute! It's really cute! I especially love the way Kyosuke proposed Miki. It's totally cute XD And well, there is things beside kissing that a newly wed couple do on their wedding night *giggles*
Ana chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
I thought it was funny! Hope you write another one.
anala chapter 1 . 12/1/2009
awesum sexy and exposing
bintu das chapter 1 . 8/6/2008
its really good...i loved it.u r great.
j3dd chapter 1 . 11/14/2007
its ok!
advisory177 chapter 1 . 7/20/2007
hey bud, now i need to ask wat this is about first. if its ur plan of what there first night as a married couple wud be like, then yes, u hav things pretty well, i suppose. if u however plan to make it a story, this wud be an ok place to start. i also like how kyosuke is unsure about seeing her naked. but to add more effect, u should somewhere show his frendz teasing him about having to sleep with miki, and this gets him thinking, so when time comes hes really nervous. coz right now it loox wierd, since mikis alrite and kanou is all messed up and unsure about her naked. they are married so i doesnt make sense. instead have him unsure about *, since thats more common a fear for ppl like him. gud luck
Crazy Sardines chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
Cute and funny.. :D
Toki Hasegara chapter 1 . 6/18/2007
Hm, besides a few grammatical errors, and some lack of detail, it was quite amusing. :)
funny sakura chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
hey it was good bt do start writing very long stories instead of short ones they may be great jus start writing...

good luck...
RAECHAL STONE chapter 1 . 4/16/2007
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