Reviews for Night at the Pound
kongosoha chapter 3 . 2/16
This is easily one of de saddest, creepiest stories I've ever read, and I have mixed feelings right now, but you did an awesome job! The pace, the characters, everything - congrats, tbh!
curligurl0896 chapter 3 . 6/14/2015
Well, damn.
I just finished reading this right now, and though at some points it was confusing as all hell, it was pretty good. The whole idea that Al created Ed without realizing it, just so he could have an older brother to look up to... God, so intriguing.
Guest chapter 3 . 5/13/2015
This really fucked up my mind...I like it
Guest chapter 3 . 1/15/2015
Wow, what a mind screw. You do a great job writing this. Good balance of the creepiness and horror, but subtle. The normality of it adds to the feeling that something's not right with the Elrics.
Cutiepie120048 chapter 3 . 11/15/2014
*Cries* what the heck what the heck what the heck what the heck what the heck...CAN YOUEXPLAIN TO ME?!

I'm soo sad - amd confused a bit - but mostly sad! Poor Ed and Al!
mamita chapter 3 . 5/30/2014
Hello, I loved your fic, Al is about Ed and Winry and Ed do not go together or joke that is wrong with Alfons Ed, I understand that this so hurt Ed at Al but Alfons is not to blame, I prefer Ed uke, I love the couple RoyxEd, although the couple AlfonsxEd love it, especially because I love Ed, but sometimes it's silly, and Roy is even more silly and perverted before fics hopefully do more of them, you still so thanks and kisses.
steferstheawesome chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
...I'm crying. This is... *sob* *sob*
steferstheawesome chapter 2 . 10/23/2013
This disturbs me greatly... O.o I don't even know whats going on anymore.
steferstheawesome chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
*cry* W-what... Y-you... this is...
Starryshine chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Just read all 3 chapters, I've got to hand it to you for the way you tackled the different realities. You didn't take the easy way out and go alternate universe everytime Ed died. Those around him had their perceptions screwed up with, but the world in general hasn't changed, and there is evidence of each shift if you look for it.

I haven't felt this sorry for Ed in any other story I've read. Congratulations ;_;
Dragonfire Alchemist chapter 3 . 3/3/2013
I...I think my mind has permanently been blown...
Excellent job, and I know that I am NOT sleeping tonight O_O
Aonokioku chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Jeeze. Poor Ed. Poor Al. I don't have much to say... but it's so sad, and there's a bit of horrible truth to it.
Sue Do-Nim chapter 3 . 11/25/2012
-Swears a LOT- This is AMAZING and so complexe but not rushed and... and... creepy and it makes some sense but some parts are so far-fetched but those also make distorted-sense and this is so... so... argh words cant even begin to comprehend it -ironically- but do you understand what you have accomplished?, this is a original fan-fiction that is awe-inspiring it is authors and stories like this that compel me to open a account -but unfortunately I do not have time to make such a commitment- One day this shit called life wont be as shity and I will have an account and I will favorite you and I will probably be called The Ranter -as it seems that it is all I can do- OR Sue Do-Nim but I doubt you care and I WILL shut up NOW...-your amazing-...
KikiElric Goddess of Alchemy chapter 3 . 10/3/2012
This is really creepy, but surprisingly addictive and amazing! I really like this kind of creepy, almost messed up way of living writings! _

Guest chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
...scary... Yet somehow... I don't know...

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