Wow. This is poetic to the core. Beautiful.
“To tangle her light in his darkness and watch the tendrils curl through creating a pattern of corrosion as the white became a hazy gray.”

would love more

I am so glad you came to the dark side to write this masterpiece! It is truly beautiful

Wow, short but lovely

Wow this was just so deep and amazing that it blew me away. I was honestly surprised when I read that you weren't a KanameXYuki fan. You really made it look like you were through this. Anyway dont you think it's ironic that you aren't a KanameXYuki fan and yet you were still able to write a one-shot about them that is this popular? I do. Keep up the good work in your other stuff too.

loved it.

Even though I love Zero/Yuuki so much, I think you wrote that pretty good. :) I like it to see the darker side of kaname and you did a good job! :)

Lots of fluff and well described! :))

BRAVO ! Amazing one-shot , very cute .

Aido/yuki much better!

But this was nice to.

This was a vary sweet romantic story! I loved it! I wish there was another chapter! Good luck on other storys! LOTS OF LOVE!

it's so cute, love it!

..Yuck, normally I am a Kaname/Yuki But I donno how but for some reason your able to make kaname seem so ...uncute or cool, infact he sounds rather disgusting :P

nice

I loved this story...WOW...It kept me holding my breath to the end and then...POW...I was blown away. Excellent job! I know you are not a Kaname/Yuuki fan, but please, could you write another one?