Reviews for Mai And Ty Lee's Day Off
MetellaStella chapter 1 . 5/11/2012
Reminds me of Katara and Toph's day off in Ba Sing Se.

. . . I'm kinda disappointed that Ty Lee isn't happy about being with Azula *at all.* I mean, she did threaten her, but I think there's some real friendship under there somewhere, too. I wonder if Mai knows that Ty Lee got threatened? She went along willingly, but Ty Lee didn't . . .
Crazy Dyslexic Nerd chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Lol, direct 'Tales of Ba Sing Se' quotes!

-Dyslexic Nerd
EarthGoddess3134 chapter 1 . 8/4/2008
awesome job!You made this story sound better than the katara and toph one
Luiz4200 chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Those were the same girls from the Ba Sing Se tale of Toph and Katara, right?
WWMTgirl chapter 1 . 1/28/2008
*grins* The story of Katara and Toph, Mai and Ty Lee style. Great job!
card castles chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
There were some typos and improper grammar. And the same word being said too many times in one paragraph. Such as: [It was a white dress with black sleefs, MAI tried on the dress. MAI looked beautiful in the dress.] Like that. You also spelled sleeves wrong.

Otherwise, it was ok.
a simple teen chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
This seams a LOT like tales of katara and toph
Mr. Average chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
Very nice. Personally I think Sokka and Toph are the funniest characters. Too bad you didn't continue so we could see Zuko's reaction. It could've ranged from Zuko being utterly shocked to Zuko laughing hystericly. Peace
frizzles chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
It was a good idea and plot, but it was a little short. Good job though.