|Reviews for A Tale Of Two Apprentices|
| Joshua chapter 28 . 1/5
While I cannot deny that was was a huge (and I do mean HUGE), epic story, there was so much happening that it felt like the events should have been separated into completely different stories. Plus, even though Slade is undeniably awesome, there were many times throughout the story where he seemed WAY too powerful. As tough as he is, there is no way he could have beaten the True Master, Terra and Red X all by himself, especially with such short breaks in between each fight. Regardless, this story was very exciting and well-written. It is easy to see that you put your all into it and it really paid off in the end. Speaking of payoff, you made a great choice in having Slade's final battle be with Robin. While Slade a very tense rivalry and hatred against Red X and Terra, Robin was his true nemesis. Always has been. So thank you for writing a very satisfying conclusion to their rivalry.
| Violentshadow chapter 1 . 8/6/2012
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/6/2012
will terra make it out of this twisted problem! find out.
| teentitanfan64 chapter 28 . 4/3/2010
i thought the story was awsome i read all three and they were great!
| Ms. Unlucky chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Ahahahah! It took me two days but i finally finished reading The life and times of Red X! Finally I can read THIS story! lol i was gonna read this one first until I read the authors note... Good story! Glad it had a sequel! :D
| One chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
The longest addition to the trilogy yet!
It is interesting to see how Terra has really changed the master thief, but it is still a little bit sad to see how Red X seems to become just like your 'average superhero' (whatever that is).
But the story was positively epic, a lot of action, a lot of characters, (also a lot of interesting developments), a lot of twists and a lot of interesting comments (I wonder if this is one of them).
Though maybe aside from Terra and Red X (very cute moment I might add, I think I understand why you rated it mature, quite a steamy scene), the character development might have taken one step forward and two steps back. I mean by all means, people like Chu-Hui and Beast Boy were done quite spectacularly at times and you did keep everyone in character but too many characters...
And it sorta felt like the Cheshire Speedy thing was just thrown in there. But then again, a ton of characters in there so that is somewhat expected.
But by all means, it was a fantastic read and a nice end to the trilogy (or is it the end...)
| Tianimalz chapter 28 . 4/15/2009
The ending made me cry. I'm such a sucker for happy endings, and omg... I seriously cried. I'm so sorry it took me so long to read this. I've been working hard on my own Ter/X story... and this was such an inspiration I'm writing more as soon as I write this review.
This story was beautiful. SO beautiful. I have no words to put down to remark on how much I loved it. if I could, I'd favorite a hundred times over, just so it would flood my inbox and let everyone know how much I loved this story. It takes a lot to make me cry like this, from shear beauty, imaginative and insightful talent that is your writing. The wonderfully discripted (this coming from a major BBT fan) characters, plots, and in depth perception that you honored throughout.
This is by far, one of the best stories in the TT selection. I feel so glad to have read it now, to appreciate it and feel the completeness of knowing that good stories are out there. I want to read the first one, the story I missed. But the Ter/X scenes where just so cute, that I'd probably be disappointed (no offense, it's my fault xD)
I'm sorry this review is so short... but I am just completely amazed by the great light that this fic shed, and the amazing constructive and intriguing manner that it went about going around this twisting and wonderfully action-packed story. Great job on Slade, the poor man. And X, omg X. Terra, Robin, you gave them all good depth, features, and outlooks that they deserved. (Terra could have been a little stronger, but her character still stayed true, I can't dog against how you played her.)
If you ever continued this, let me know. Please.
As in the words of the Great Kung Fu Panda, Po,
Last thing I'm gonna say.
| DragonTamer186 chapter 28 . 2/14/2009
Seriously dude how are you doing this?
This entire series was better than most trilogies ive ever seen
your whole red x series is going on favorites
| GameSharkX chapter 28 . 9/7/2008
NO NO NO! TBB foreva!
| Blueyedblonde chapter 1 . 6/21/2008
Wow, reading this chapter I realize that you're awesome with fight scenes ! And you keep them all wonderfully in character. ]
Great job !
Now on to the second chapter. D
| Crazy Lady Knight chapter 28 . 8/5/2007
I absolutely Loved your entire story. But especially how you ended it. It was a nice ending but not overly happy (perfect happily ever after). Are you writing another teen titian fanfic? if soo I can't wait to read it!
-Crazy Lady Knight
| Forlorn Melody chapter 28 . 8/5/2007
Wow, I can believe I'm breaking my rule of reviewing the last chapter, though I've reviewed the rest. I liked the end. Especially Slade's death, the fact it was more accidental. Good job. I only have one question, are you going to write another Teen Titans fic soon? I hope you do.
| Gabe chapter 25 . 7/22/2007
aw... that's so cute!
| Xavior Nightshadow chapter 25 . 7/20/2007
A moment long overdue. That's all I've got to say. Good to see you hadn't disappeared - I haven't seen you about the 'net recently. And I still wanna see Testing the Chaos Theory one of these days, mate.
| rock n elemental chapter 21 . 6/29/2007
Oh My Gosh! I know it's a lot of pressure trying to continue a story but, you can't leave people hanging on that for more than a few days... This is like the BEST story I've read in a very very long time. I feel bad for BB in a way that he can't get Rae to like him, but I'm hanging on a thin string of suspense one in which could break at anymoment, driving me insane. The story MUST go on! But a tip, whenever I write, it always helps when I re read the last chapter I wrote.