Reviews for Seconds
sabichou chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
And now I only can think how in only a few minutes you make me cry... Seriously the day of their birthday ? And killed by a jerk ? And just 10 seconds to say goodbye ?

Anyway thank you for your fanfic it was very good, maybe just too good !
Fullmetal Vampire Lover chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
I had tears in my eyes... Actual Tears.
Brown Eyed Girl 42 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
*sniffsniff* you made me cry...excellent death fic. Just beautiful.
kariuchiha19 chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
mire, YOU MADE ME CRY!...feel proud, it takes ALOT to make me cry when reading a fic!XD
xXxSnakebites chapter 1 . 1/19/2010
damn...i liked it. (

sad, Edward-sempai went boom. TTTT
bmystee chapter 1 . 1/26/2009
WAH! This made me cry!

*sniff sniff*

DamianSasuke chapter 1 . 3/7/2008
It's amazing and so sad, i was listening to Vic Mignogna's song Hello Beautiful, and it's a sad song and with this fic, just made me cry. it's amazing and i love it.
E.Mahiru chapter 1 . 11/26/2007

You KILLEd ED! How am I supposed to ENJOY a story where Ed DIES?

And leaves Roy behind... asking him, "Please, live. For me."
Aibou.of.Yaoi chapter 1 . 11/8/2007
*crys very loudly* WHY?

Ed: Um...

Me: *hugs Ed hard* Don't leave Roy! You must grow old and happy together! Damn it!

Roy: Fine! *takes Ed away* He's mine! *nuzzle*

Ed: *nuzzles back*
futuregypsy chapter 1 . 10/22/2007
so sad! Good story, though. I'm adding this to my fav's.
The-Muse-In-Me chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
That made me genuinly cry.. x'[ -cryingness- That's so sad..! I hope I don't die and make my boyfriend depressed.. Unfortunatly, I don't think it can be helped.. Him being depressed I mean, not me dying..
AznBoxingGirl chapter 1 . 5/22/2007
That's a sad story...It's me! Lien!
Hazel chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
You offically made me cry with this one. Great job!
FlyWyre chapter 1 . 4/28/2007
The actual counting down of the seconds at the end was clever, it added power to the text and tied in with the theme/title/mood, which I'm assuming was your aim to begin with ;)

Good stuff, thanks!
xxdecimated chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
This is so sad...but really...really good D
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