Reviews for Black
ginzuisho-hime chapter 1 . 12/12/2011
This was simply put a beautiful tragedy. One of my favorites
violaqu33n chapter 1 . 12/19/2007

those r tears, fyi

baby killer...
Haileyamandar chapter 1 . 9/25/2007
Brilliant. Beautiful. Perfect.

You're an exceptional writer and this fanfiction was exceptional. I loved it so much. Keep it up.
PilotDante chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
It was good, made me cry
nostalgic-maiden chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
this was amazing! the imagery, the emotions, everything was so nice. i love it. great job! D
Fire Red393 chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
All I can say is "Wow." This story made me hold my breath and then almost cry it's so good! My only suggestion is to seperate different scenes in the story so the reader doesn't get confused.
sweetdiss69 chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
aw that was so sad...why did rin have to die...poor kakashi
Delirium Cordia chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
TT sad!

It's very good, but you switch from past tense to present tense and back throughout the story, which is confusing. And there wasn't any break between the part where Kakashi and Rin are together and when Kakashi's on a mission so that was also sort of confusing, but other than that it's written very well. good job!