Reviews for Kingdom Hearts III
superguy chapter 1 . 12/5/2007
I wanna see Sephiroth. He's probably my favorite.

-Frank
superguy chapter 2 . 12/5/2007
Jo,

This is really good. Sorry I haven't found the time to read a lot of your new writing. I'm working on that...making time. Been busy. You're really good at writing characters. I can picture them perfectly. There are some picky things, but for the most part a really solid first two chapters. I really like the chemistry between Rarous and Ariki. Somehow I get the feeling that something terrible is going to happen to Ariki and Rarous will have to rescue her? Maybe I'm wrong, but it would just be epic in my opinion. Rarous seems very headstrong, and I wanna see him duke it out with the villain to reclaim Ariki. But, knowing you, it's going to be much more epic than that. Keep it up, buddy!

-Frank