Reviews for Scenes in the Gazebo
cywen69 chapter 3 . 1/19/2008
That was kinda funny, with everything going bad. I read a story with a similar premise a long time ago call "It's Right There" (I think) with the same plot twist. They make a bet, Lorelai wins, she gets him to have sex in the gazebo reluctantly. The actually sex scene was more comfortable for them, because they brought a couple of blankets.

The fact that they concieved their kid there was great. I'm surprised Lorelai didn't nickname her Gazzy or something. My sister-in-law and her husband concieved their son on vacation in the Cayman Islands, so they named him Jake Cayman. I guess their encounter does make for a great story.

smileyGGfan chapter 3 . 1/17/2008
Another fanfic I apparently didn't get a chance to read the first time around! (Hope you're enjoying all of these reviews from me lol). I know Lorelai's gotten Luke to do a LOT of things he didn't want to, but I can't believe that she actually coerced him into having sex in the gazebo. Loved the stakes of the bet too, what a great idea. I also loved the conclusion and how Lorelai thinks that their child was conceived there that night, butt splinters and all lol. Can't wait to read more :)
sarahb2007 chapter 3 . 12/26/2007
aw i was dissapointed with how you rushed things i wish you would take it slower
Copop chapter 3 . 12/24/2007
I don't believe my eyes! You updated this one! Wow!

Well, I loved it. I think the possibility of being caught is a real turn on.

In this other story I am always babbling about they had placed blankets and stuff ín the Gazebo beforehand, but hey, this way we got Luke talking about porn and that it's not real. So, I'll take this LOL

Aw, and she got pregnant during that. This is so 'aw'.

And due to the circumstances "Andie" is a great name.

Can't wait for those last chapters.

Keep them coming!
lancer1993 chapter 3 . 12/24/2007
Great stories

maybe next time the Firelight festival?
glo1196 chapter 3 . 12/23/2007
Yeah! I am so glad you updated this one! I loved the new chapter and can't wait to see where you are going next!
chants chapter 3 . 12/23/2007
Thanks for the update. I was hoping you would get around to continuing with this story. I hope you can get the rest posted soon. I can't watit to read more about Andie.
Reba0is0Ahmazing chapter 2 . 9/28/2007
very good
LGBTFTW chapter 2 . 4/25/2007
you better continue. im serious! I WANT MORE! and i like to get what i want. so... what are you waiting for? stop reading this review and post another chapter!
cywen69 chapter 2 . 4/21/2007
I really like it so far. I finally got a chance to read it with the lack of updates on my other stories that I've been reading. Plus I just got on my space and I've been on there quite a bit. I really like your site too. For some reason I pictured you as blonde, stupid I know, but that was my mental image. Well, gotta go.

LGCoffeeAddict chapter 2 . 4/16/2007
so cute
MAVDP chapter 2 . 4/10/2007
Oh, just found this story... Lovely beginning to say the least! I like how you included the original episode and still make it believable. Sometimes in fanfics, when people use dialogue of the show, their own part in the story bleaches, but that is totally not the case here and I loved that!

Can't wait for more ;)
LukeNLorelaifanatic chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
Ok, first off: So deja vu completely overtook me when you introduced Luke's mom as Kate Danes. Ok, so, I'm a roleplayer. Yeah, you can make fun if you want, I know I'm a dork. lol Anyway, so I once made an RP account that was Luke's mom because some of the roleplayers decided to RP the characters at a younger age and so I named his mom Kate Danes. Yeah, so, there's that little story.

...during one of her many crazy ramblings that seem to come at the most inconvenient times, such as during the lunch rush at the diner, the middle of a movie in a fully packed theater or his personal favorite; right in the middle of sex-

That part had me cracking up. lol Lorelai would really do something like that.

I'm short on time and I want to read the next chapter, so I'm going to cut this short. Love it so far! Especially all of the stuff with Luke's parents. I love hearing about them!
Cinny72 chapter 2 . 4/8/2007
Omg, I totally love this so far! I just adored the prologue, and how you showed the similarity between Luke and his dad and their respective women; I've always thought that Luke must be a lot like William was. And the way that you got them together, at the basket bidding auction, was perfect. Go Luke!

Update soon! :D
Ele chapter 2 . 4/5/2007
I finally found time to read your story *yay*

I so wanna see your version of the picnic on screen. *pout* A tisket a tasket is such a nice ep. I like your story so far, the second-hand taste of the brownie thing cracked me up.

Please update soon! :)
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