|Reviews for Demon's Feign, Merlin's Pain|
| Vengeful Astartes chapter 7 . 11/16/2013
That has to be one of the best chapters i have read.
| Nox chapter 19 . 11/5/2013
Wow just ... Epic!
| kffs chapter 19 . 9/19/2013
| ladyowl chapter 7 . 8/29/2013
" an evil torturous Netherlander"... huh. The Dutch reputation seems to have gotten a bit out of hand... Best, LO
| Sebby47 chapter 19 . 8/17/2013
Great crossover! I'm crossing my fingers that you'll start up the next part of this story soon. This was a most enjoyable read and I hope you keep up the hard work. There aren't that many good Dresden files crossovers out there but im happy to say yours was a most enjoyable read. Hopefully ill be reading more of this story soon, keep my mind off the wait for the next Dresden book.
| Anonymous chapter 19 . 8/11/2013
Where are these episodic chapters that you said you were going to write? Are you still deciding what to do first? Or did you give up on them?
| forTheLoveOfHades chapter 19 . 8/6/2013
| Joncis chapter 4 . 8/4/2013
"I thought you ate children but then I gave you a chance and saw you don't eat children, and realized we had something in common."
That was probably my favorite line in this story thus far. Especially when considering the context.
| CaBuckeye chapter 12 . 7/30/2013
HP may be a host now; but, is he still a "speaker"? (courtesy of HD's "magic trick" that removed HP's horcrux)
| frozenthrone23 chapter 19 . 7/11/2013
holy shit! that was one hell of a ride! a sequel to this would be fucking epic.. maybe Harry and Harry going back to Potter-verse.. damn!
| becuzitswrong chapter 9 . 6/18/2013
Weird and interesting. I am still a bit confused by the mixing of the show and books, but I am finally getting a handle on the changes. So Harry finally meets a Blackened Denarian. And it's Lasciel. Funny.
| becuzitswrong chapter 8 . 6/16/2013
Damn, but Harry is effed up. I mean, he is just short of batshit crazy. I can see him grieving over his friends, but over dead parents who he never knew? He goes crazy over the idea of anyone knowing about Lilly. Huge sign of serious dementia. I think I prefer mostly sane Harry to batshit crazy Harry. Still, I do understand that the things he went through are enough to break the minds of most people, wizard or not...
| becuzitswrong chapter 7 . 6/16/2013
That was pretty funny. So Ancient Mai isn't so ancient after all. That must be from the TV show.
| becuzitswrong chapter 6 . 6/16/2013
That was pretty funny. Everything from the Ancient Mai's reactions to the little confrontation with Murphy and Potter. Good stuff.
| becuzitswrong chapter 5 . 6/16/2013
Harry is pretty much crazy at this point, isn't he? Hopefully, with time and rest, his sanity will return. And he defeated the Blackstaff. That is one bad ass wizard, too. Damn good chapter!