oof well

Perfectly executed scene. I loved it. Thank you!

Short one but nice one

i love this its awesome

Great story! Your oc was so believable, I really enjoyed it.

WOW!

Wow.

Wow

I don't know what else to say.

Words couldn't possibly convey my feelings about this story.

And I was too heavily under the influence of terror, drama, humor and especially - suspense, to actually feel anything, until he told his younger brother at the end that his hands wouldn't stop shaking, and that's when IT happened...

my hands started shaking too, and all of the above mentioned feelings caught up with me, right there and then,
and I presume I will continue shake for sometime to come..

Awesome, Thanks .

amazing!~~~~

YOUR AMAZING this was so on point and realistic as it could get like the milk thing brilliant well done i enjoyed this alot haha.

Hahah

Awesome.

Cool story :)

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review: I loved this story! There's nothing quite as much fun as protective Dean, unless it's Sam and Dean having a silly argument in the middle of a convenience store robbery. This was absolutely delightful.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards: June 2016

An exciting and enjoyable story. Characterisations were very good, with everyone acting in a very believable way. Only criticism would be that the way the cashier explained events to the police felt a little rushed- fully understand the decision to gloss over that part of the story, but it left the reader with a lot of questions & was a little jarring.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards Review - June 2016

I think we all wonder how this situation would play out if the brothers were actually faced with it. A strong and believable OC narrates as events escalate at an exciting pace. Very believable outcome, with the Winchester brothers right on form. Good story!

Great story! I really like OC point of views and this one was terrific. Thanks for writing!

Very, very nice. I like that the POV is from an outsider. It's interesting.