Loved the oc pov.

stop-and-rob...
*laughs*
Love that terminology.

I enjoyed this story immensely. It was fun to read. As someone that was a clerk at a stop-and-rob that was held up at gunpoint one night, I can totally understand where the clerk is coming from. It's weird the thoughts that flash through your mind at the speed of light when there's a big ol' cannon shoved in your face.

And you could tell by Sam and Dean's calmness they were used to being in danger. You portrayed them very well. I especially loved the argument they had while having a gun pointed at them. Only they, dysfunctional as they are would do something like that.
lol
Great story and very well written. Thank you.

omg loved it the protective Dean was amazing!

Awesome story!

I really liked the sheer normality the two brothers show even under this kind of situation (which isn't too bad for them...)

I'm at work doing a crap job so I Googled crap job. So, things could be worse. Great story, well writted (are you a fan of Chandler?).

Love it:)

Hahaha! That was excellent! I would absolutely want Sam and Dean in my store if it ever got robbed :) I really enjoyed reading it from an OC's pov, it was entertaining and a new slant on the supernatural fanfics that I've read. Very fun to read, thanks for sharing!

Dude, this is an awesome story! I loved how you put two more brothers in the mix, and the description with the grand canyon, and the whole 'we are going to Vegas', and the fact he calls his brother in the middle of the night, and the fact that you added that part about the struggling college students and...and...*takes a huge breath*...it was just freaking amazing!

lol. that was good

This is lovely... Simple but somehow very Winchester. ;p I loved the cashier. It's nice to know hoe a non-hunter feels...

Yay! I love when Sam and Dean inspire outsider people to reconnect with their siblings. It's just super awesome on their part. Beautiful work. I loved how the robber was an idiot and how Sam and Dean bickered over the money clip. Great work!

Ah, it's always nice to find a good story on FF.

The descriptions and narration of Sam and Dean, I love them.

Great writing.

Wow, I loved it! I have a soft spot for outsider POV, I love it for some reason, and this was a really good one! You really brought the OC to life, and you wrote the boys' perfectly! Wonderful job. :) Also, what song were the boys singing? I'm really curious! Thanks.:)

I liked this story :)

Very in character! Plus, it's always nice to see the brothers from an outsider point-of-view. I liked this a lot and you had a great voice for the storytelling. Thanks.