It was nice to read a story from the POV of someone uninvolved with the Winchesters. I really liked your characterization!

You write Sam and Dean perfectly!

Great story. You were very good in showing the difference in perception of the situation between Sam&Dean and the outsider, who apparently has never been in life-or-death situations. Makes me wonder what was going on in the robber's head - is he really so dense, or is it first robbery for him too? Awesome job

Awesome. xD You're really good.

Great story. Love the OC POV.

aww yeyness :D thankyou thankyou that was immensual :D xx

I love this story. :) It's an excellent look at the Winchester brothers from an outsider's point of view. I especially like the way you included those erratic bits of mental flotsam that are normal for most everyone, it gives the narrative an extra feeling of realism. I'd be a wreck too if I'd been in that situation.

Thanks for writing this!

Nice. I usually don't like outside POVs, but I love stories where the boys get caught up in some kind of random violence, like a hold-up. This was a good one. The interaction between the boys was perfect, and Dean's protectiveness was just right. Loved him taking that guy down. Man-that had to have been the stupidest robber ever! Also liked the little bits of humor throughout-the cashier's thoughts about the soured milk being his legacy, the resignation written on a paper towel. And I liked that you ended it with another set of brothers. Well done!

Aw, this was so beautifully written. I LOVE that you wrote it from an outsiders POV. And I love it even more that as soon as the robber was down, everything went back to normal, whether the cops were coming or the robber was laying unconscious in the middle of the floor or not. XD Definitely going to favorites! ;D Stupid robber shoulda picked that store at a different time. ;P

Hey! Just stumbled on this piece and loved it! The brothers are spot on...teaming up to try to handle a the tough situation they find themselves in. I love reading it from the convenience store worker's perspective...He is hilarious! And I loved seeing big bro Dean go all protective of Sammy when he finds out his little bro is being held at gun point. I love how they worked together...eventually arguing about the situation and untimately disarming the robber. It was so "Sam and Dean" and I loved it! Thanks for sharing a great fic with us!

Wow, I gotta hand it to ya. You write VERY well. I had to add this great story to my faves list...the OC POV was very original, what a great character. The action was intense with just the right amount of humor. I could see this really happening!

Good job!

Wow this really was a great story. Sam and Dean arguing during a robbery CLASSIC...

That was so good. I loved Sam's banter with the robber!

that was funny

Okay I know it's stupid, but I'm dying to know what Dean slipped into his pockets that we didn't "see" what was lol.

Still loving your stories though!

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