Reviews for A Body She Couldn't Control
Guest chapter 16 . 8/28
You need a sex ed class and an anatomy class. Would be better if you didn't write so pretentiously. Cervix is not found anywhere near a woman's neck, btw. You're thinking of a collarbone or clavical
MadamScorpio chapter 31 . 12/10/2014
i really like Haku! where is sango n miroku?
MadamScorpio chapter 27 . 12/10/2014
wha-whoa whoa what the fuck happened? lol what happened to Seikumi?
MadamScorpio chapter 21 . 12/10/2014
i really liked this chapter! love the fight scenes lol!
MadamScorpio chapter 17 . 12/10/2014
i was like oooo get it in the beginning then eek im not ready for that then wtf serious, then goddamn then kick his ass then aaawwww lol
MadamScorpio chapter 14 . 12/10/2014
i hate paid programming too! especially when insomnia hits! what a bitch lol
MadamScorpio chapter 13 . 12/10/2014
so it worked...YAY!
MadamScorpio chapter 8 . 12/10/2014
tht was a turn in events lol...hopefully we get to know the long story of how Jak and Inu got together and on the island...what about the other people on the island? i hope they got off..hojo is weird lol kikyo is forever s bitch lol

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MadamScorpio chapter 6 . 12/10/2014
omfg was not expecting that!
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MadamScorpio chapter 4 . 12/10/2014
holy shit baskets lol...
MadamScorpio chapter 3 . 12/10/2014
right because Mike Epps is not that funny lol...she got rejected by Inuyasha again..damn lol
MadamScorpio chapter 2 . 12/10/2014
Jakotsu is slow lol...this story...woooow! thumbs waay up lol
MadamScorpio chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
just...wow...she's addicted to monster cocks! yikes!
i like Bankotsu! lol poor Bank lol
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A-game chapter 28 . 12/5/2013
Wow. I really liked this chapter. It was so heartbreaking that it made my stomach turn and burn my body up! Thanks.
A-game chapter 13 . 12/5/2013
Ye-ah. Right. Um, see, you have to bite him as deeply as possible right on the shoulder, and let the blood trickle onto his back, where upon you will slash him across the back, in a strictly diagonal fashion, so that the fang blood will intermingle with the claw blood. If you truly love him, the slash wound will heal itself. But if not, then he'll bleed to death. The female's role in mating is crucial to the male's life, really.

Wow. I really got to say that you got my attention on THAT paragraph. I mean bleeding to death? Harsh for inu-kun... ;} Thank anyways for the great chapter!
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