|Reviews for A Body She Couldn't Control|
| A-game chapter 28 . 12/5/2013
Wow. I really liked this chapter. It was so heartbreaking that it made my stomach turn and burn my body up! Thanks.
| A-game chapter 13 . 12/5/2013
Ye-ah. Right. Um, see, you have to bite him as deeply as possible right on the shoulder, and let the blood trickle onto his back, where upon you will slash him across the back, in a strictly diagonal fashion, so that the fang blood will intermingle with the claw blood. If you truly love him, the slash wound will heal itself. But if not, then he'll bleed to death. The female's role in mating is crucial to the male's life, really.
Wow. I really got to say that you got my attention on THAT paragraph. I mean bleeding to death? Harsh for inu-kun... ;} Thank anyways for the great chapter!
| ChocolateReader chapter 10 . 10/4/2013
I love this story! love the idea and plot.
| ElementalHanyou chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Please please pick up the fanfic Falling Through the Clouds! I've been waiting forever to finish it, because it was so awesome
| Raven chapter 8 . 10/16/2012
Damn, i was expecting to much I guess. amazing story up until the point where she gets randomly taken away even though HouJo has the main woman he wanted, never really touched base to well with why it hAD to be kagome, seems like you were just trying to fit a conflict in this story when it didnt really need one so... random. The lesbo scene could have been alot more into it and touchy feely. Keep writing!
| Raven chapter 3 . 10/16/2012
I'll be reading the entire story. Very slick with your words, and involving a bunch of characters.
| Raven chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
I like where your going with this story, although it started out a little fast and straight forward, I can't judge a book by the first chapter! Normally I will read until chapter three, unless I like the book very much. I love the details you give in the intimate areas. Have a wonderful day!
| KarenaTheFreak chapter 37 . 9/13/2012
I know how you feel about reading your old stories and wondering what was going on in your head. I've recently started writing again and noticed the huge difference from how I used to write. I am in the process of editing one of my stories right now and almost can't bare to read my own story. I do hope you get interested in writing again, even if it takes a very long time.
| bb chapter 1 . 8/24/2012
me like story
| miss prisss chriss chapter 37 . 4/9/2012
This story brought back so many memories of when I was in jh and read these fanfics everyday. I stopped and just now picked back up. That was amazing. Keep up the good work. :)
| Piperlovessoul chapter 16 . 1/12/2012
I liked this story well written but the bit about rape put me off complete and made me anxious and nervous about reading further on
| danceofthefire chapter 37 . 1/10/2012
I found this story on friday and was Hooked by the first paragraph so i started reading it on monday and just finished it. I must say I love the cliffhangers in almost every chapter they really made me want to keep reading, and i also like how you worked in unrelated things like the "Hey There Delilah" and things from Family Guy lol (not sure if im making any since... I LOL'ed when the bad guy turned out to be houjou instead of naruku and i did not expect her to end up having kids by Inuyasha and Juun... all around great story! Thank you for taking the time to write it.
| Guest chapter 17 . 12/27/2011
I didn't get the ur just like ur father comment
Was that toward the real father
Or inuyasha the step father
| kagome313 chapter 37 . 12/23/2011
Aww, your really hanging it up for good eh.
well, not much there to say other than i'm really sad lol cuz ur stuff ARE amazing 3 Also, all the best in whatever else u may persue.
I remember the last time we spoke u were already in college (dorms to boot - which i envied u lol) and doing psychology - another envy xP...So I hope all is going well D
All the best! _
| RoseFalles chapter 1 . 12/23/2011
So good. I was thrilled that I need to look up words while reading this chapter. You have no idea how much poor wording and lack of vocabulary irks me. Its going off to a great start love how long the chapter is and how your not rushing the plot.
Normally I'm not in to forward Kagomes but for some reason I loved her in this and the sex was great LOL.
Keep it up :) ps I like the title