|Reviews for Belong To Nowhere|
| mokubahv chapter 16 . 10/25/2007
M...I don't think a sequel is necessary, but if you ever feel the urge, I won't complain. I thought this story was fairly interesting and definately different. One thing I didn't like though, is that Remus wasn't exactly taken to the shrieking shack during the moon and just thrown outside. While that was a good way for James to find out, it bugged me.
| siriuslyblackxx chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
definately an interesting plot! can't wait for an update :)
| sarah chapter 14 . 7/8/2007
i am reading this, simply because i want to see what happens. but let me tell you this: your writing style is really poor. you say so many stupid things and you have horrible subject-verb agreement half the time. work on your grammar and your writing.
"“I am not racist of werewolves! I am racist of liars! "
This made me cry out in despair. It's probably THE dumbest setence I've ever read.
| lizy3333 chapter 14 . 6/20/2007
keep up the good work ;P
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 16 . 6/8/2007
AW. SO sad in the beginning and then so GOOD in the end! I LOVE THIS SO BLASTED MUCH, I REALLY DO.
I don't want to leave the story... I don't, I really don't... *sobsob* promise me youll write soon again!
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 15 . 6/8/2007
(O)_(O) OMG, when Sirius was crying in the courtroom I was like... crying too. It reminded me of the end of Moulin Rouge. SOO sad... no... I'm like, tearing up...
the sealing thing is adorable. I can't believe the remus is leaving... NO! XD
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 14 . 6/8/2007
“Don’t Sirius me!” Sirius snapped, waving the crumpled note in his face. “What the fuck is this?” He exclaimed, holding the voodoo puppet in his face. ROFL! THAT WAS BLOODY HILARIOUS.
I love the voodoo doll thing! And yes, not naming the ravenclaws is a good idea, it makes Remus seem soo isolated. HEHE :D
OMG NO! Remus got EXPELLED? GREASY SLYTHERIN GIT!
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 13 . 6/8/2007
“Shh! I’ll tell you when it’s more private–” “Oh, I forgot,” Sirius said, smirking. “It’s a private talk. Are you starting female menstruation?”Sirius sighed, and then waggled his eyebrow. “Privately? What happened? Did you wank off in front of Lily accidentally? Did you accidentally cut off something that didn’t mean to be cut off in potions? Are you peeing out of the wrong place? Is–”
AH. SIRIUS is being a pervert now! How can he be so rude to Remus about being a werewolf! NO! *cries profusely*
Update soon! PLEASE.
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 12 . 6/8/2007
HEHE. They're back even! Even James is... :D I'm so happy for them... they're just so... aw.
I love this too much for it to be healthy... It's so... GOOD. Hehe. Love it. Keep on writing, please!
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 11 . 6/8/2007
AH. It's soo... GOOD. :D :D :D :D
I can't believe it, but they DID IT. *grins manically*
Positively WORSHIP this. I worship you! I LOVE you! WRITE ON.
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 10 . 6/8/2007
:D YAY they're back again!
Don't matter by Akon. XP AM I GOOD OR WHAT?
I love this story... it's so deep and emotional, it's like I'm the characters... you really brought them to life here.
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 9 . 6/8/2007
AW. SOO sad!
It's so messed up for Sirius... aw.
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 8 . 6/8/2007
Both happy and sad, honestly. :D
I love the retarded baby is being born! BRILLIANT.
All of the signs... just kiss him, SIRIUS!
:P I love this. too much for health.
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 7 . 6/8/2007
Nasty combination, they were. *giggles*
Sirius groaned again. “For Merlin’s sake, don’t you people learn? Two and a half hours have passed and you think Remus is still in the library?” “Well… He’s done it before.”
:D SO in character!
O_O omg... no... NO! so sad... too sad... NO...
Ah. update soon! PLEASE.
| XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 6 . 6/8/2007
BOYFRIEND IN THE MAKING. HEHE. He heard before that love is being stupid together but with Remus love would be being smart together. He’s clever and Remus is sharp. He’s witty and Remus is intelligent. Sirius hears everybody’s love stories and sometimes he thinks where’s mine? but now he knows where his love story is. Something including the jealous friend and the two boys who knew everything would be complicated and forbidden… dear god, this was lovely. Sirius’ boyfriend proves that there is such a thing as a decent guy.
I love that part. I know it's long but I love it...
O_O I can't believe it! JAMES IS SUCH A FREAKIN BASTARD, the PERVERT! NO!