Reviews for Homecomings
ne71 chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
I really loved this. Great moment with Wliie and Marty in the icehouse.

If I could suggest one thing, it'd be to remove the boldface and go through the story again with punctuation in mind. The bold and the lack of punctuation at the end of the dialogue is distracting, and the story content is too good to let something like that interfere.

I'd be happy to help if you'd like.

Nick
housefan1 chapter 1 . 7/8/2009
PLZ SAY YOU WANT TO CONTINUE I LOVE MARTY AND WILLIE AND I THINK THIS HAS AN AWESOME START! PLZ CONTINUE!