|Reviews for Snowball Melting|
| lunar locket chapter 1 . 1/7
Sora's dialogue in this is simply my new faveorite thing in the world! I hope you continue writing pieces such as this! -
| Nightmaric chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
I have no idea how I never found this piece of pure gold before. THIS WAS PUBLISHED SIX YEARS AGO OMG.
You totally made my day with this. I was literally wheezing from how hard I was laughing at Riku. And then the end was all 'awwwwwwww' and 'oh, so they do do the thing in the end'. Riku's incredibly considerate despite his profound stupidity during the [one-sided] courting. XD
| Sayo7772 chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
Goodness, it's amazing how much can a misunderstanding cause! Including the last sentences of this awesome fic! :D Definitely a fave! Love it sooo much, great job, dear! :)
| AnimeFan202 chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
I'm really not quite sure what to say... I love your writing style. It's very entertaining, and this story wasn't rushed in the least. I'm glad that you made sure to add in Sora's friends.
To be honest, the first time I read this through, I thought that Sora was being a little illogical, whether they were going out or not. Now, I figure that I've just been infected by too much slash fanfiction. It does make more sense that Sora would find Riku's proposition offensive and not just want to fuck the boy because he found him very attractive (which is how it works in most other fics) when he didn't think they were going out.
| sesskagthebest chapter 1 . 6/22/2013
a really cute one-shot... it was funny, long and well written... I can see Sora being this dense and I loved Riku...
| SoRikuR0x chapter 1 . 6/21/2013
lol man. i loved it! Thats so cute! :D
| DreamingOfSasuNaru chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Hahaha this was cute and funny!
| vestiged chapter 1 . 3/22/2013
This was absolutely amazing, cute, and fun to read.
| Favorator chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
I remember reading this a looooooooooong time ago even back when I didn't have a ff account and thinking this was the best Sora/Riku one shot ever.
That opinion still holds to this day.
Thank you for making a one shot of Sora and Riku that could stay one of my favorites (if not THE favorite) for all these years.
I'll never get over the fact that Sora was all like, "We…we're dating?!"
I honestly never laughed so hard at a single line in fanfiction like this.
I'm having a hard time finding some decent Sora Riku fanfics right now, but coming back and rereading your old fics just keeps up my hope that there may be more fics like this some day, and give me the hope to keep searching.
| xXUndertaker-19Xx chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Loved it. haha the Vibramoogle. :P good job :)
| Justice Tokidoki chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Wow, this was really well developed. I like how you built up their relationship slowly and how they became friends through the oddest of circumstances.
It was really well written, and it got extremely hilarious once Riku started doing a whole bunch of stuff to apologize to Sora. It's interesting that they both felt the same way about each other, yet Sora's misunderstanding caused the whole thing to collapse.
Ha ha, really well done!
| xox.heart chapter 1 . 8/11/2012
Thank YOU for writing such an adorable one shot. Your writing is like a god damn breath of fresh air.
| Dreamy Duskywing chapter 1 . 7/12/2012
Ahhh. This made me grin like a loon. Loved it
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
It was so cute! I couldn't even take my eyes off the screen! It was just soo cute!
| navime chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
Brilliant and incredible.