|Reviews for Fixing It|
| MabelDipperTails chapter 1 . 2/14
Oh my gosh u had me thinking that it was Mikey who was killed! The heck! Donnie (my favorite character). I pictured Donnie was the one throwing everything and trying to fix whatever Raph broke, but no. It was Mikey. Great story. Five stars.
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2014
DONNIE!? Wow literally tearing up now! This was great!
| hiccup-mikey-robin chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
Wow. I knew some were off, but I tried to ignore them:
1. Donnie has red brown eyes while Mikey has baby blue eyes. I brushed it aside thinking that maybe you just got confused with eye colors.
2. Donnie doesn't need a textbook to fix a television set.
3. Mikey doesn't hold the family together. It's Donnie who can. When Leo was "AWOL" in South America for almost two years, the family remain intact. When Donnie went AWOL in SAINW, Mikey cannot keep Leo and Raph together. Donnie comes back and hours later, there was a big family reunion.
4. Donnie isn't the jubilant one. It's Mikey.
5. Raph doesn't call Donnie "ya little..." when they fight. Usually, it's Mikey whom he calls "little" but not Raphie.
However, even with the signs, I never expected the ending. Mind-blown.
| RascalKat chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
You tricked me, ya son of a gun! And you did a brilliant job at it. That'll teach *me* to make assumptions, pft.
But seriously, that was amazing. The entire time I felt like something was just a tad off about the way you were describing the character I *thought* was Donnie. He wouldn't have needed a textbook to fix the circuit board, but maybe even he was having trouble fixing something in his grief. I really wouldn't describe him as "happy and jubilant" but I was willing to accept it because I'd already had that assumption nailed into my mind. The use of the word "haft", which makes far more sense in a reference to nunchucks rather than a bo staff, was lost on me.
Everything that was said had an underlying emotional explanation that I thought would work, but I had to read to the end to realize that I was looking at the story upside down. Kind of like one of those pictures that looks like a face whether it's upside down or rightside up.
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant. Not to mention you made me cry, which is quite a feat in and of itself.
It's truly fascinating to reread this and recognize the more accurate subtext that I couldn't have noticed before. Perfect. Absolutely perfect.
| Silverfrost chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Oh god...this is really sad, but also very well written, and in a way, full of love. I liked the way you make it seem like Mikey is the on who died, with Donnie talking...but it's really the other way around. Great job, especially for your first fanfiction. Keep writing, and may the wind be forever at your back; may it rise under your wings!
| Private Franklin Delano Donut chapter 1 . 9/1/2014
Mah gawd...You fooled my for the entire story, i had to reread it just to understand that it was Donnie who died...
| Cayleigh chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
This story was astounding. I love the ninja turtles, but the story isn't great because of them it is the way you wrote it. I had to go back and look it over again to see all the little details that I had missed. Wonderfully written and great ending.
| Saluzozette chapter 1 . 5/28/2014
Oh. My. God. It's. So. Awesome ! I can't believe it was Mikey all the time ! . When he said "he was the one who kept us together" I believed so hard it was Donnie talking about Mikey !
I juste loved your OS. Wonderful, painful, bieautiful. Almost perfect (and I say almost only because nothing can be perfect but, for me, I can't see what is wrong). Congratulations.
Keep writting, please !
| Cocoaflower chapter 1 . 5/22/2014
Oh gosh... you meant to do that, didn't you...? It was so like Mikey had died in the beginning and then it turned out that Donnie died... *sobs quietly* I feel so sad for them...
| Hitori2707 chapter 1 . 4/23/2014
Wow that ending was incredible, I must be stupid for not having the slightest clue it was coming but I found myself half sobbing and going ooooohhhh at the end of it so I guess that's a job well done. Amazing and original concept very well done xxxxx
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/9/2014
THIS WAS FREAKING TWISTED!
| XIIIth Hazard chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
Aw man I could hardly read it was crying so bad... You got talent
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/28/2014
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| Juanita27 chapter 1 . 12/31/2013
This is a wonderful piece you have here. At first I thought it was Mikey who had died until I got to the flashback part. Near the end when leo removes don's mask from around Mikey's eyes sealed it. This was very moving and sad, and very well done. Poor Mikey trying to fix it by taking Donnie's place. Really cool idea for a story, with the shocking plot twist and all- well done! And the memorial in the corner and mine trying to fill dons place is very moving- makes me tear up!
| Rhea chapter 1 . 12/3/2013