|Reviews for Too Show You Care|
| redvelvetcupcake chapter 1 . 5/10/2014
hmmm it was ok, I just don't see them doing that (I'm sorry)
| someone chapter 1 . 4/28/2014
i can't believe you write that!
| Sam chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
If you knew the other stuff I've read (and loved) you'd be calling me a heck of a lot more than a sick bastard... Just saiyan. But apart from quite a few typos/ grammatical errors, it was well written.
| Doppo chapter 1 . 8/29/2013
It was really fantastic. I enjoyed read it so much.
I'm really glad to read your fanfiction.
Thanks for you!
Sure, you are a perfect writer.
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013
A bit of bad grammar here and there...
BUT I DEFINITELY LOVED THE STORY!
IT WAS SO SWEET!
| Meyaoi chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
i just had a spasm that lasted 3 minutes because of that. that may happen if you've been reading Zolu yaoi for 5 hours straight and then come across this magnificent thing. Good day to you!
| skyspottedshadow chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Sick bastard, huh? S'not very nice of you.
| yageni chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
woa! that was great, funny and sweet and hot!
just one thing. what's that of first act, second and third? I mean If you want it on chapters just publish it on chapters, otherwise is pretty distracting an cuts the mood (especially on the third)
But I really liked your story! XD
| Sev'slittlesecret chapter 1 . 5/16/2010
You can't belive I read that huh? :) I cannnnnn! It was very well writen and I loved it! It was a very cute and loved how you got Zero and Luffy together like that! - Very cute!
| Saya List chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
yes im a pervert get over it
and you spelled usopp and pants wrong
| LunaticV chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
that was great, though i think there're many spelling errors
| 777angeloflove chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
KYA! *YAOI FANGIRL SQUEEL* THAT WAS AWESOME! XD I LOVED IT!
| AKATSKI GIRL chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
LOVE IT !
| Baluka Usagi chapter 1 . 7/4/2009
That was an awesome story and great ending. I loved it. If haven't already you should make a sequel!