|Reviews for Black Moon|
| Loving-The-Originals chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
It broke my heart reading. He was an idiot to leave her in the first place, but I'm glad they found each other again later in the end of new moon I can't wait for the movie!
| looneybaloony chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
that was really good! But i have to ask, are you going to write another chapter? Your writing is REALLY good and i would LOVE to read another chapter! :D
| edwabella chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
I know its been awhile sence you wrote this but I have to say well actually Im alittle speechless It was beautiful I wish there was more but I'm realy glad I got a chance to read it your so intuned
with Edwards character well done realy...
| jensen122 chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Extremely well writen. Ever think of a author as a job?
I have a story to, would love if you could tell me what u think.
If not, its cool.
| EvenTheStarsRefuseTo chapter 1 . 3/9/2009
Wow. That's kind of all I can say. You are amazing.
Thank you so much for this unbelievably accurate insight into Edward's character. I had never
really thought out his plan of action or motivation in leaving before. you nailed it )
| victXoria chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
This is very well written! You captured the characters perfectly. Wonderful job with Jasper. Since you never actually get to know him that much in the books, your interpretation of his personality fits perfectly with what you do know about him. I loved it! If you are going to write a chapter with her dream in it, then don't tell me what happens. If you're not going to, then I want to know!D
| bluocean444 chapter 1 . 2/24/2009
Wow. That was reall good. I hope you'll continue.
| Olirin chapter 1 . 2/12/2009
This was so amazing! You write Edward so perfectly! Please write more! I feel like I am reading a continuation of "Midnight Sun"! There is no cheese, no stupid remarks that are out of character...this IS Edward! Perfect.
| luvwriting13 chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
OMG I LUV IT - PLEASE COME CHECK OUT MY NEW STORY! PLEASE!
| Titch22 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009
Amazing story, so angst ridden but so well written. You write Edward really well.
| Karenlea12 chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
This is so beautifully written but also so sad. I'm getting teary knowing what is going to happen next.
| archie chapter 1 . 1/15/2009
wow this is really good, you should write the end from Edward's POV from italy and onwards : )
| Twilight-Obsessedd chapter 1 . 12/26/2008
That was good. But i think you should keep going, you know, write chapter 3, 'the end' when he leaves her. then do the chapter when he comes back, chapter 21 i think.
| I-HEART-EDWARD-JACOB chapter 1 . 12/23/2008
like everyone else said it is totally write his POV so convincingly Please continue- at least to the part where he leaves her in the woods.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 12/16/2008
This is perfect. Absolutely real. This is exactly how Edward thinks.