Reviews for Remember to Breathe
Guest chapter 1 . 9/16/2015
:( :( :( Ohmygosh. So sad!
MysticRuins22 chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
I'm like borderline crying. This is one of the best stories I've ever read. You captured all of the emotions beautifully.
MariaSabaku chapter 1 . 7/26/2011
Tears came to my eyes as I read this.

It was so sad, but so sweet. I really enjoyed reading it. (:
Dipped in Pocky chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I really do not like you *pout* you made me break down so hard. I mean even down I'm still crying.

This story is just so sweet and so cute, and so depressing. But, I have to applaud you, because this story was phenomenal. It shows how Ino got worse. It's just so touching, and I hate the fact that she died, but I knew that she should, and I don't think I could have pictured the ending any other way, it's just sad that she had to die.

And dude, I was in hysterics at the ChoujiIno scene. You are a wonderful author. :3 favoritingthisstory.
moonlightpath chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
it's sweet, touching.. oh but why did she have to die? sigh

keep writing shikaino fics please :)
Nebulous Paradigms chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
That was so unbelievably sad and totally touching! I was ready to break down. D': I couldn't believe such a short story could hold such heart-breaking sentiments. :( Nonetheless, it was awesome.
an1m3.l0v3rs.gr4sp chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
wow... heartbreaking... I love it! Great work!
kiwi4me chapter 1 . 10/11/2008

can i say...

this is so sad and dude...

i wanted to cry.. i mean i am!

damn... great story,

and love it!

write more of these two please!
SnowNight chapter 1 . 9/21/2008
Absolutely beautiful. I love the way you wrote it and the words you chose.

When Ino admited that shes scared too I seriously started to cry.

Good work keep it up!
JaliceLove chapter 1 . 9/8/2008

SkyMaiden chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Aw this was so very sad. I could feel that I was about to cry it was very touching. Good job.
TheMagicPen chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
Aw...That was so sad but so sweet at the same time! Awesome fic. _

deux-michelle chapter 1 . 7/30/2007
NO specific disease, eh? how about some sort of lung thingy?

poor shika!
mood ink chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
gawsh! that made me cry! that was so sad! *sniffle* *sob*
Animes chocolate-cherry chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
That was so sad...really well done...but extremely sad...


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