Reviews for The Sex She Slipped Into My Coffee
Asya55 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I think I just died for few minutes, WOW, HAWT, is all I can say, I'd take Dean over coffee anytime LOL, great that was great, I can go die somewhere else imagining Dean like that... *Thud* ;P
BlueEyedPisces chapter 1 . 6/8/2010
Is it wrong to be absolutely envious of a fictional character? lol, cause seriously who the hell wouldn't want to take some nibbles out of Dean.
deansbabygirl934 chapter 1 . 7/27/2009
oh my god...i think i might have slash backs for a while..it made me light headed..
Deedle2226 chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
First, I'd like to say that I don't usually post a review. I should because there are so many great stories and the authors should get the feedback they deserve, but I never know what to say that isn't simply "Great job, keep it up!" and though this is usually enough, I'd like to be more meaningful than that. Now that I'm done rambling I want to let you know that this piece of writing is fantastic. Your descriptions are captivating and your character is extremely likable as well as easy to relate to. You are a truly great writer and I hope you choose to continue with writing if only because, put simply, you write they way I, and I assume a lot of others in this world, think.
Kentcharm chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
super funny, *blushes* I can really relate to this girl. Our sense of humor are almost identical. Love it.
C.Gold chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I'm actually at a loss for words- this is amazing. I love it! :)
apparentlykatie chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
I've read it like a few dozen times so I thought I'd leave a review.

Amazing story, probably my favorite oneshot. Love the style of narration. One of the only beleivable OFCs I've read in a Supernatural fic.

Keep up the amazing work !
MeriLoveLee chapter 1 . 5/4/2007
Hot Hot Hot girlfriend...keep it up!
Zelost-Mind chapter 1 . 4/29/2007
Guh. How come I'm only just reading this? That turned me to goo, I should probably be ashamed about how much I enjoyed it. Your OFC is wonderful, I love her, and your Dean? God.

Thank you for sharing it.
Mirajane Scarlet chapter 1 . 4/10/2007
Me again. (Like it'd be anybody else, right?) I actually read this one first but forgot to review it. Like everybody else who reviewed this, I can say this was pretty much awesome. And one other thing, you're only sixteen? And you wrote that sex scene? Impressive. Very nice work. lol. And also, like a lot of other people said, that was...well..it was just a great scene. lol.
The Goddess Aurora chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
Oh Wow. Pretty much my only coherent thought.

It's fitting that Lauren was a caffeine addict like Dean. Do I really need to tell you how amazing that was? Because, damn, it was.

I love that her thoughts bled into the narrative, it seemed more real. And the description (not of just the sex) totally awesome. I could probably go on forever, but I think that about covers it within the non-obsessive-fangirl realm.
Lilmisshardygirl chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
Oh my. Um whoah. Yeah that was just sorry I can't get anything coherent out at the moment.
lovestoread chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
that was an incredibly hot fic! I was certainly entralled and its got me wanting more of Dean and Lauren. They certainly are HOTT together especially the sex! WOW! Now that was something!
Neha chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you! *screams with joy*

That was amazing! Just amazing! Please hold on while I try to breathe... ok..ahem...

This line had me laughing for a good minute- it was ‘oh hell no’ o’clock, from my calculations. LOL!

and this one too- I couldn’t josh the liquid around, risk spilling it over my hands – or worse, onto the concrete. I need it, damnit. Couldn’t lose any of it. Mine. Mine. Mine.

LOL! Lauren is addicted to caffeine! Hm...I always thought it was Dean. lol

And this had me giggling for a good few minutes- At least those thoughts were a guaranteed way to way me warm up a little...Just genius!

And porny-mushy-morning sex is just wow! lol!

I loved it!

Thank you so much, once again!
Diva0789 chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
for the record i LOVE how you write...i love that ending. he keeps trying to convince her he is better than coffee. not that i would need convincing! lol...cant wiait for more BIT and all your wonderful one-shots...are yout he one who writes that ABBA story?...i think so...but im a bit scatter brains..midterms an all...well, i cant wait for mroe of that! if your not the author then ignor my ramblings...
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