Reviews for Valediction
Nelras chapter 1 . 8/20/2008
Oh, Peter...
Shallicoe chapter 1 . 8/18/2007
so that he doesn't have to share her with even the earth.

what an amazing line. beautiful story! :)
Rosa Cotton chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
Oh, this was cute and sad. Poor Peter. *hugs him* The way you've written John in your stories is interesting, how he urges Wendy and Peter to give up each other. Fascinating.

And he's gone, back to Neverland and the lost boys, back to Tink and Hook and Tiger Lily. And although he's hardened himself to the word, although he's grown used to its ruthless sting, he's never been able to tell her . . . "goodbye."


Thank you so much for this supply of wonderful Peter/Wendy stories; I've had a pleasant evening reading. I hope you will continue to write for this fandom. :)
mondayblues chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
My first Peter Pan fanfic ever. ;D

SO sweet. It really was. I loved it.
GlowingGreenEyes chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
I love your Peter Pan fics. You should write a longer one! :D
Professional scatterbrain chapter 1 . 4/3/2007
Rubber-duckiesofdoom chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Hey... so good :)

I guess it's the word that sprung the poem to mind, but have you ever read John Donne's A Valediction Forbiding Mourning? It's an exquisite poem :)

Poor Peter. Growing up is tough, especially when you're not the one doing it.

straywords chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Oh,so very bittersweet. I lkied it very much-excellent characterization there!
Arashinobara Jikkankakyoku chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Cute, in a sad sort of way. Flangst is so exquisite, ne? A sweet drabble with good writing that accentuates the flow. Two thumbs up!

- Arashi-chan
mary-v chapter 1 . 4/2/2007
Oh dear. Way to make me all sad now. :( This was brilliant. You've done it again!:D